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Marge Tindal
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0 posted 2008-07-13 07:29 PM



Thunder Walking
~*Marge Tindal*~

God is talking
His thunder is walking

across an angry, angry sky
Causing one to wonder why
the lightning strikes back
at the total lack
of compassion in flow
that comes ... then goes
leaving hearts-in-break
emotions-in-quake
God is talking
His thunder is walking~


***Just one of those typical Florida afternoon/evening summer storms***



~*The sound of a kiss is not as strong as that of a cannon, but it's echo endures much longer*~
Email -               noles1@totcon.com

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1 posted 2008-07-13 07:39 PM


Pip is back! ~ and the first thing I see is a poem from our illustrious Marge! God's been 'talking' here as well.

I love rainy, stormy days ~ but of course, I love sunny, clear days too! Whatever He 'says' or whatever 'mood' He's in ~ I look 'n listen in wonder!

I'm so pleased that you are feeling well enough to write your wonderful poetry!

Love 'n healing hugs,
Earthy One xo

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2 posted 2008-07-13 07:47 PM


Brilliant Margie girl!!
Nothing short of brilliant.

Love you lady~Nance

Martie
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3 posted 2008-07-13 07:48 PM


Hi Marge/sis...We here in So Cal haden't had a storm for so long...but last night we had the most brilliant display of lightning and thunder, even rain.  I ran outside and danced around in it.  I hope your are getting better and better!!
jwesley
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4 posted 2008-07-13 08:37 PM


Beautiful Marge.

j

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5 posted 2008-07-13 11:59 PM


it's been storming here for 2 weeks sraight basically

I was getting tired of it but if I look at it like this poem portrays I am wanting more!

Margherita
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6 posted 2008-07-14 08:10 AM


Ancient wisdom flows in your powerful words, dear Marge.

I can see you standing on a hill in midst of the thundering and lightning, inviting humanity to pause and reflect, to awaken to love and compassion.

Love and hugs.
Margherita

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7 posted 2008-07-14 08:20 AM


Yes, this is a volumnous write.

·´~`·­»Garapan«­·´~`·

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8 posted 2008-07-14 08:27 AM


A write worth standing in the storm and praising God for his majestic glory.

Sending you healing love and hugs, Marti

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9 posted 2008-07-14 09:20 AM


Yes, don't we just hear God saying
"Wake up and see the truth," in the
midst of all this chaotic weather, fires, floods, earthquakes, etc.

Your poem so aptly describes this.

Praying they're able to pinpoint your
problem source and a remedy to cure it,
soon.

God bless,
  Rae

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10 posted 2008-07-14 11:21 PM


As thunderously wonderful as storms are, only God could create something like this.  I really enjoyed this, Marge,

tb

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11 posted 2008-07-15 04:12 PM


I enjoyed this one veryyyyyyyyyyyy much, Marge.

Seems to me your new lease on life has come equipped with a sharper quill.

Brava!

ThisDiamond
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12 posted 2008-07-15 10:39 PM


Always in good voice!
Safe journeys

Paul Wilson
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13 posted 2008-07-18 12:35 PM


Marge...I hear ya loud and clear. GREAT TO HAVE YOU BACK AMONGST US...Paul

~~To share my poems with you is to share my heart with you~~
Paul

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14 posted 2008-07-18 01:39 PM


Hello, Marge.  Lovely to read your words again.  I used to live with someone devoid of compassion but now I see it everywhere and again have some hope for this world of ours - in the long term, that is.  
Love
Helen

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15 posted 2008-07-18 08:20 PM


I do love a good storm...

feeling the 'thunder' in this, Marge...

"When the power of love overcomes the love
of power the world will know peace."
--Jimi Hendrix

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16 posted 2008-07-27 07:48 PM


Dear Marge:

Impressive write!  I often have this very thought during bad thunder storms!

Love
Betty Lou

Betty Lou Hebert

Marge Tindal
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17 posted 2008-07-27 09:58 PM



You ALL are so kind to this poetess~
From the heart of my little bottom I thank you and ask the Lord-of-my-knowing to richly bless you~

*Huglets*
~*Marge*~

~*The sound of a kiss is not as strong as that of a cannon, but it's echo endures much longer*~
Email -               noles1@totcon.com

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18 posted 2008-07-29 11:17 PM


You just hold me spellbound, Marge.  Wonderful and I am so happy to see you back posting.  How are you feeling?  My thoughts are with you.

Alison

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19 posted 2008-07-29 11:42 PM


I love to sit back and watch the lighting-- and hear the thunder...

Sometimes, it really scares me how loud it could get, and the big strikes of mother earths lighting.

Chilling but, wonderful and beautiful Sights!

I loved the write Marge

It's a



ARCTIC WIND

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