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Joyce Johnson
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0 posted 2008-07-12 02:32 PM


Fatal Embrace

The wild bind-weed is Nature's thug.
He sidles up with gentle hug,
Then follows with a deadly squeeze
And takes his neighbor's life with ease.
He is more evil than the slug.

So if you see a pretty vine
With lovely blossom, so benign,
Beware and with your garden knife
Take that imposter's wicked life.
Let greedy slugs upon him dine.

If you should chance to let him stay,
He will not ever go away.
He'll use your plants for his support
And bend them in a strange contort.
With their very lives they're forced to pay.

Your helpless beauties cannot shun
This grim tormentor and can't run.
If an anaconda took your breath
You'd die a most distressful death.
Death by constriction is not fun.

By: Joyce 6/22/08

© Copyright 2008 Joyce I Johnson - All Rights Reserved
Earth Angel
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1 posted 2008-07-12 03:36 PM


Oh, my! Perhaps it would have been prudent of you to give readers a warning that this post contained scenes of violence ~ and murder!

Gosh, all binder weeds beware! Joyce has a knife and she is not afraid to use it! lol

Dang those blasted binders!
A very cute write!

Linda

[This message has been edited by Earth Angel (07-12-2008 04:54 PM).]

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2 posted 2008-07-12 04:24 PM


As one gardener to another, Joyce, I understand completely. Kill a couple for me.
This is delightful.
                             Ida

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3 posted 2008-07-13 10:34 AM


This is great, and so true.  I experimented with seeds this year, that way if they didn't make it it was not a big loss.  Needless to say I learned the hard way when a couple of them wanted to take over and wind their way around the flower beds.  There were a couple flowers or two, but for the most part they ended up looking like one big over rated climbing vine of a weed.  Not the look I was hoping for..after all the tender loving care I gave them.  Hmmmph!!!  

Good poem Joyce, and I like your title too.

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4 posted 2008-07-13 11:35 AM



Interesting how even in nature looks play their role
the attractive bird gets the mate,
and the pretty flower attracts the bee,
round, and round.

I think I would like to come back as a weed myself
I might get sprayed or cut down,
but just think of the beauty I would be surrounded by.
oh, and the pretty flowers,
they would be nice to be around,
as well.

Very thought provoking and wonderful piece Joyce, thank you.

Rich

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5 posted 2008-07-13 01:01 PM


Thank you for the lesson on this rascal of
a weed.....Now, where is my knife?

I enjoyed this,  it taught me a few things
and I will watch for more.

LindsayP
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6 posted 2008-07-13 11:08 PM



Joyce those words were written by a true gardener. I can just see you with your knife

in hand stabbing at those wretched weeds and saying nasty words under your breath.
Great post Joyce, a big hug.

Lindsay

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7 posted 2008-07-13 11:41 PM


excellent rhyming scheme here Joyce

I admire your work!

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8 posted 2008-07-14 02:40 AM


I really enjoyed this Joyce and hope you will read us more from this wonderful diary?
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9 posted 2008-07-14 10:13 AM


The poem is really great, dear Joyce, but I pity the weed, though I understand the damage it can bring. It reminds me of my childhood, when I had to eradicate the weed, but was never happy with it.

Your poem works also as a metaphor for the behaviour of human beings ... no doubt.

Love,
Margherita

Robert E. Jordan
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10 posted 2008-07-14 10:22 AM


Yo dear Joyce,

This is well done.  It takes all kinds to make a garden.

Love Bobby

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11 posted 2008-07-14 05:39 PM


good read
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12 posted 2008-07-14 09:55 PM


You captured the beauty and slyness of that choking weed so well.  I'm sure they don't stand a chance in any garden of yours.

I really enjoyed this.

God bless,
  Rae

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13 posted 2008-07-14 11:19 PM


Speaking for myself, I have plenty of weeds in my own life to tend to!  Love your metaphors, Joyce.  
tb

Lynne
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14 posted 2008-07-15 05:00 PM


"The wild bind-weed is Nature's thug."

I couldn't agree more!

I enjoyed this poem, Joyce - it just about sums up what the dreaded bindweed is doing to my raspberry patch. No matter how much I cut, dig and pull up the little shoots when they start, back they come again to hug and squeeze the poor bushes.

Thank you.
Lynne

Joyce Johnson
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15 posted 2008-07-15 08:36 PM


It came into my yard from a transplanted shrub which was growing in an infested garden and I was unaware.  By sheer diligence and perseverence I have confined it to one patch in my yard but I think the only way I can eradicate it is to dig up the whole garden and smother it.  I have some choice plants in that spot and I ahve tried to control it by digging each piece but it is impossible.  I do not ever let it bloom for that would endanger my whole yard.Thanks for your comments.Joyce
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16 posted 2008-07-16 12:55 PM


I was just wondering about invasive weeds this last weekend.  You explained the situation better than anyone else, Joyce.

Alison

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