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Joyce Johnson
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0 posted 2008-07-12 10:39 AM


I Remember

When neighbors came to visit
And we'd just sit for awhile.
Mama would cut her new baked cake
And serve it with a smile.

Or perhaps we'd have a game of cards,
Of Rummy, maybe Whist.
We'd talk about the folks passed on
And how much they were missed.
The new preacher might be discussed.
Some called him high-falutey,
Until Mama reminded quietly.
"To save us is his duty."

Those days are gone and now we sit
In front of our big TV.
We learn about the whole, wide world
And neighbors never see.

Joyce 6/7/08

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Earth Angel
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1 posted 2008-07-12 11:08 AM


Joyce, I remember those days as well! Gosh, I'm feeling nostalgic right about now! Yes, times have certainly changed. Mind you, I continue my Mom's tradition of baking cakes, but ofttimes I use a cake mix! ~ and then eat it by myself in front of the big screen TV!

Love you!
Linda

Robert E. Jordan
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2 posted 2008-07-12 12:01 PM


Yo dear Joyce,

This is a nice poem.  Some of us do sit out, in fact, here in the hood, it's common.

I always sit out, starting at about eight thirty, after I walk the dog.

There's always someone to talk to.

Also, when I walk the dog, there's always someone that wants my big dog to hug them.  Her name's Hilda, and Hilda loves everyone.

Love Bobby

Marchmadness
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3 posted 2008-07-12 04:29 PM


Things were different a few years ago but those times are gone and when we are gone only our words may remain to remind people that those times even existed.
                                 Ida

SarBear
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4 posted 2008-07-12 11:26 PM


I really enjoy this poem. Times truly have changed and I wish I could have experienced what you wrote about in the beginning of your poem. People cut themselves off from everyone else these days.

Great right,

Sara

OwlSA
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5 posted 2008-07-13 02:34 AM


I loved the nostalgia in your lovely poem, Joyce.  Thank you for it.

And Bobby, if I lived in your hood, I would be the first in line to hug and be hugged by your dog, Hilda.

- Owl

LindsayP
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6 posted 2008-07-13 11:46 PM



That is a great poem Joyce but it is a wonderful thing that we can retain such

wonderful memories of that bygone era. It brought back a lot of memories for me as well. I love the way you write. Love.

Lindsay

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7 posted 2008-07-16 11:21 AM


Enjoyed the write! Joyce                                      
ARCTIC WIND

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