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words in the face of time |
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nourzihane Member
since 2008-07-10
Posts 254Algeria 
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O myself ..... You love ....... Screaming .........in Silence All things ....... in Silence i Live moments of rupture ......... My heart droppes in the land of your sadness ........ And your screaming is growing ..... And grow ........ And grow ........to Besiege me ........ i Suffocate .......... to die........ To die a thousand times .......... And once ........ In silence ......... then i draw you.......... In the form of board of letters........ To creates words .......... Words in the face of time ....... *********************** I do not know English well, but just tryed and forgive me if you find a mistake my Greetings |
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Margherita Member Seraphic
since 2003-02-08
Posts 22236Eternity |
Welcome, dear nurzihane, to Pipland! I love your poem, it shows true depth. You will improve, while continuing to write. There are quite a few here of us whose mother tongue isn't English. Of course sometimes there is some frustration when we realize our limits, but still we try! Love, Margherita |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
To paraphrase the saying, "silence can be golden" ~ but there are times when it is not. I admire those poets who write in a language that is not their mother tongue. English is mine and I have taken French and Spanish in school. Trust me, if I were to write poetry in those languages, my poems would not be any way near as good as what you have just penned! May all the silent moments in your life, be of the golden variety!  Giving you a warm, welcoming pip hug, EA  |
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nourzihane Member
since 2008-07-10
Posts 254Algeria |
......margherita ....... my humble world needs to light of your presence here. the letters bowingdown with your wonderful pass. thank you margherita my greetings |
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nourzihane Member
since 2008-07-10
Posts 254Algeria |
......Earth Angel ..... yes English is not my language but i'm trying to learn it because i like it so much . Your shine presence among my leaves Larger than i understand my Alphabetically My sincere gratitude |
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