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Obsidian Song
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Obsidian Song |
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ThisDiamond Member Rara Avis
since 2002-02-22
Posts 9353Michigan, USA |
Obsidian Song Sullen feels strange, as it grips and kneads the last pulse of all too long Coral colored blur to blind me, nothing of initiative to drive me Suction has released the very last pump of enduring fate, sit and wait Meditate Obsidian soul, rendered imposter to be, carefree normally This mood is not dark, but lost in the thickness of longest hours The sated outlook drought devours, spends itself to be an adverb only Most for certain times are lonely, as day withdraws from morning sun Done is done And what is not, lingers beyond my fingers in perfume and lingerie Formidable challenge devoid of deacon, muffled Marco Polo beacon Seeking with my heart each breath impound Tumbling in granite tone profound Helplessly, the hopeless air is ground Waiting for accompany, so sound Copyright Kkh 7/11/08 |
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XGarapanX Senior Member
since 2008-06-19
Posts 1435Antarctica |
There are a lot of great lines in this. Hard to pick a favorite. ·´~`·»Garapan«·´~`· |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
"Obsidian Song" ~ what an apt and perfectly poetic title for this sad song so beautifully sung. As you may well know, obsidian is also known as "Apache Tears". Loving hug for you, dear TD, EA  |
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Ericc Member Elite
since 2003-01-31
Posts 4178 |
Wow...this is lyrical and full of beauty. Wonderful write! Eric |
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BluesSerenade Member Patricius
since 2001-10-23
Posts 10549By the Seaside |
Coral colored blur to blind me, nothing of initiative to drive me ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~ Kathleen~ You are a breath of fresh air, the brightest star, a lonesome tear, a passionate heart, and a diamond so rare and true. I feel fortunate to read you, and I wonder if you know the pleasure it brings. Thank you for the gift of your words, they are ever so meaningful to me. |
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WindWalker Senior Member
since 2001-10-12
Posts 1218 |
This is a good one!!!!! |
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