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A Romantic Heart
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Forever In Your Heart

0 posted 2008-07-11 01:00 PM


    


Feel my breath,
warm, hot,
soothing,

Taste my lips,
sweet, juicy,
enticing,

Fingers feel,
soft skin,
pressing,

Passion burns,
lighting fire,
desire....

    

(note:My Poetry is no more than what one would
see on a modern day soap opera, or lifetime TV, etc.)

© Copyright 2008 Millette A. (Lester) Addison - All Rights Reserved
Ericc
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1 posted 2008-07-11 05:27 PM


Passion and beauty woven
together.
Great write!

Eric

XGarapanX
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2 posted 2008-07-11 08:14 PM


This is really, really good.

·´~`·­»Garapan«­·´~`·

graeshine2006
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3 posted 2008-07-11 09:47 PM


Your poetry rocks!  Soap opera, schmoap opera... I love reading what you write and I don't watch soaps!  
secondhanddreampoet
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4 posted 2008-07-11 10:39 PM


once again, in my ever-so-humble opinion, the smaller-sized graphics
images effectively enhance (rather than distract/detract from) your word-
painted 'poetic' imagery and intent.

applause!

Alison
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5 posted 2008-07-11 10:43 PM


Lovely ARH,

I have enjoyed your poetry for a couple of years now.  I don't always respond, and lately, I am aware that your poetry is deeply personal.  It's wonderful that you share your heart with all of us.  You have a beautiful heart to share.

quote:
(note:My Poetry is no more than what one would
see on a modern day soap opera, or lifetime TV, etc.)


This, darlin', is not true.  Your poetry is far more than what is seen on tv.  I think your poetry is the mirror you hold up to your heart - and you let us view it with you.  This is a beautiful gift that you share with us all.

Thank you for your generosity.

Alison

A Romantic Heart
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6 posted 2008-07-12 12:35 PM


Alison,

you have such a sweet and tender soul, I just popped in to see your reply to my poem desire, and I wish to thank you, deeply it touched me.

I wrote the disclaimer at the bottom of my poem because one of my poems as of late, was too mature for open and was pulled by the moderators ...thus it is no more than kids, teens, etc. see on modern day tv.

I myself do not watch soap operas either,
if you ever need anything "darling" I am just an email away...my heart is always open to you!


A Romantic Heart
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7 posted 2008-07-12 12:37 PM


Eric~

I send kisses~
Thank you...you know how I feel...

A Romantic Heart
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8 posted 2008-07-12 12:38 PM


Patrick~

sending some love....

I am here if you need me, you know that!

A Romantic Heart
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9 posted 2008-07-12 12:42 PM


graeshine2006~

thank you, you are sweet, I don't watch them either, but my mom did when I was growing up, and that is where my real name came from..

lol...my life has been like a soap opera!

you should email me sometime, I feel we have alot in common!

~hugs to you

A Romantic Heart
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10 posted 2008-07-12 12:44 PM


Bruce~ Mr. Romantic...

Your comments and advice are always

welcome, thanks for the encouragement,

and the inspiration~of course you know

what it means to me

~Hugs

Artic Wind
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11 posted 2008-07-13 01:24 PM


Nice Write ARH!



ARCTIC WIND

LindsayP
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12 posted 2008-07-13 11:00 PM



Oh Romantic Heart, them are very sweet

words to be sure, Loved it, great write.

Lindsay

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