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Huan Yi
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since 2004-10-12
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Waukegan

0 posted 2008-07-11 12:09 PM


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Perhaps tonight
When I look up
Into an open sky

I‘ll see my father
That simple sinner

Snagging salmon
On the river of stars


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© Copyright 2008 John Pawlik - All Rights Reserved
Margherita
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since 2003-02-08
Posts 22236
Eternity
1 posted 2008-07-11 12:28 PM


Cute and loving... he will be happy to see you gazing at him between the stars.

Love,
Margherita

XGarapanX
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since 2008-06-19
Posts 1435
Antarctica
2 posted 2008-07-11 06:26 PM


Moving.

·´~`·­»Garapan«­·´~`·

secondhanddreampoet
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since 2006-11-07
Posts 6394
a 'Universalist' !
3 posted 2008-07-11 10:43 PM


QUITE well done!

applause!!

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