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poddarku Senior Member
since 2008-01-15
Posts 589india 
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Sky. Blue. ============ Blue. Sky. The kite. The yellow one is mine. String has petered out like the call of her. My mom. Sis is bored easily. Mom says, “Girls do not come with sky. They must win it.” Kite is mine. The short-term king of the blue. Rooftop and concrete float under young feet. The rival king is coming in this sky. The red one. From that neighborhood lean boy. “It is better.” Sis does not know the things. Fight red kite. This sky is mine. You move on. Unseen string versus string. Will versus will. “Brother!” Why is she so nervous? “Look out.” Perilous edge of roof that I never see. Of course sky is mine. Blue. Deep. Floating… clever talks delay friendship! |
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inkedgoddess Member Rara Avis
since 2002-11-19
Posts 7392Ohio |
The sky is yours mine and ours when our kites dream for us. |
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Robert E. Jordan Member Rara Avis
since 2008-01-25
Posts 8541Philadelphia, Pennsylvania |
Yo Ooddarku, Kites are great fun all over the place. I must admit, some of the best kite flying is found in India. You have done excellent work on this poem. Bobby |
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Margherita Member Seraphic
since 2003-02-08
Posts 22236Eternity |
quote: Dear Ku, you enchanter! This is absolutely delightful. You are always a treat. Love and joy. Margherita  |
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XGarapanX Senior Member
since 2008-06-19
Posts 1435Antarctica |
Just don't let anyone step off that roof edge, lol! ·´~`·»Garapan«·´~`· |
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vandana
since 1999-10-22
Posts 10463USA |
good one  |
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BluesSerenade Member Patricius
since 2001-10-23
Posts 10549By the Seaside |
Oh yes, the knowledge and wisdom that comes with age, so much to learn from a kite flying day. Love the sense of wonder and colorful backdrop you wrote here. |
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Kaoru
since 2003-06-07
Posts 3892where the wild flowers grow |
I'll be frank, I really do like this. |
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Prasad Nataraj Senior Member
since 2008-05-29
Posts 1149Bangalore,India |
Nice time to read this poem, we are having a big two day kite flying contest in Karnataka, India. Enjoyed your poem. Prasad |
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Roniece Dawson-Bruce Member Ascendant
since 2000-01-29
Posts 5689Sydney, Australia |
Ku... wonderful!! love RDB Be kind at heart....for everyone you meet has their own battle to fight......... |
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Midnitesun
since 2001-05-18
Posts 28647Gaia |
Oh, the memories I have of kite flying at the beach! This is wonderful, my friend. May you own the sky, and win the heart of the one you choose. |
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