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Dark Stranger
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0 posted 2008-07-11 06:56 AM



pieces of me
I wonder of the horse time
when you were a suntan
riding in my mind

and my nights were the nudity
that boys dream without reasons
until they are men again
and still wander their thoughts

now you are velvet between stones
as you drift your days often
missing the sensual sounds
of your own music

but wearing glass eyes instead
and touching with my hands
the hard earth of your shore
pressing it into the names

of my wanting to know your whispers

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daark

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nakdthoughts
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Between the Lines
1 posted 2008-07-11 06:57 AM


perfect for this summer's morn~~

M

Dark Stranger
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2 posted 2008-07-11 06:59 AM


ms MMs, thanks babe
Moonkist
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3 posted 2008-07-11 07:33 AM


lovely... simply lovely
i wonder what those
whispers may be...

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4 posted 2008-07-11 09:18 AM


D

This is beautiful.

A

Margherita
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5 posted 2008-07-11 12:02 PM


quote:
when you were a suntan
riding in my mind


Your beautiful mind, as you reveal pieces of it through your poetry, stirs the explorer instincts.

Love,
Margherita

Dark Stranger
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6 posted 2008-07-11 12:37 PM


Moonkist. Thanks to you foer the touch

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Ms ali-san thank you lil one. -------

Ms mar, thanks for exploring my mind ms

BluesSerenade
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By the Seaside
7 posted 2008-07-14 11:38 PM


now you are velvet between stones
as you drift your days often
missing the sensual sounds
of your own music

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There are always precious little slivers that sparkle in your poetry, DS.

Like sand dollars and a suntan riding your mind~

Yea~


Roniece Dawson-Bruce
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8 posted 2008-07-15 04:37 AM


of my wanting to know your whispers


mmm... Mr Daark, I think your whispers would be very sweet to hear..  lovely gifting... love RDB

Be kind at heart....for everyone you meet has their own battle to fight.........

Dark Stranger
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9 posted 2008-07-15 06:08 AM


ms bluezy..you make me wanna with your comments, thanks babe


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ms r&b, oh you are such a sweet tease, thanks ms

Sunshine
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10 posted 2008-07-15 07:54 PM


your light horse
becomes a midnight
ride for me...

bless you...

and your words


Dark Stranger
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11 posted 2008-07-15 10:36 PM


ms sun, you make me smile more
each time I read you,, thanks lady friend

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