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RC Langill
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since 2008-03-09
Posts 104


0 posted 2008-07-10 11:33 PM


Love 5.01

Love five point oh one,
A major new version,
Just released today.
Don't miss out on the new features,
Incorporating suggestions
From our extensive focus groups:
Enhanced excitement, Relationship Wizard.
It's a whole new Love!

There are a few things
You'll have to relearn,
Some of those things
You've heard, or said, or read.
Sonnets from the Portuguese?
That hasn't worked since three point one.
Where have you been?

Get with the program.
Buy a Dummies book,
Sign into a webinar,
Implement Love five point oh one today.
Everyone will tell you
Love is clearly here to stay,
At least, through five point two.

RC Langill author of Simple Feelings & Deep Passions romantic poems from a real romance

© Copyright 2008 RC Langill - All Rights Reserved
graeshine2006
Member
since 2008-06-03
Posts 368
The Prairie Lands, USA
1 posted 2008-07-10 11:35 PM


Hmmm... thinking I might need the new version... this was very creative!
Honeybunch
Member Rara Avis
since 2001-12-29
Posts 7115
South Africa
2 posted 2008-07-11 03:05 PM


I read and can't help but smile.  Love is indeed moving with the times and should be updated to incorporate what will be although perhaps most of us have no idea yet of that.

Enjoyed your words.
Helen

RC Langill
Member
since 2008-03-09
Posts 104

3 posted 2008-07-13 10:21 AM


graeshine & Honeybunch, thanks for replying. It's interesting that you both enjoyed it even though your take on it was different from my intention in writing it.

I thought didn't have to worry about my poetry becoming obsolete each time some company announced a new version because Love and Romance aren't like that. Then I thought "Hey, what if . . .?"

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