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Come a Time

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graeshine2006
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0 posted 07-10-2008 11:19 PM       View Profile for graeshine2006   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to Submit your Poem to Passions   Click to visit graeshine2006's Home Page   View IP for graeshine2006

There will come a time
When I will smile at
Him
And he will know the artwork
Of the angels by his side.

There will come a time
When he will whisper he loves
Me
And I will know the tearful joy
Of a whisper meant for me.

There may come a time
When stubborn ways come between
Us
But we survive to learn
Building up that which made us.

for

There came a time
When we felt our love with
Bodies, Mind, and Spirit
And those beautiful, burning memories save us
At the times
We need them most.

© Copyright 2008 Debra Grae - All Rights Reserved
BluesSerenade
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1 posted 07-10-2008 11:40 PM       View Profile for BluesSerenade   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for BluesSerenade

Beautifully said, graeshine~

Honest and true love will survive every storm and outlast a lifetime.

  
Marchmadness
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2 posted 07-11-2008 12:49 AM       View Profile for Marchmadness   Email Marchmadness   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Marchmadness

I hope you find what you are looking for, Debra.
                         Ida
Prasad Nataraj
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Hi Deb, I wish for better times ahead for you… nice write. Prasad
graeshine2006
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4 posted 07-11-2008 03:45 AM       View Profile for graeshine2006   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit graeshine2006's Home Page   View IP for graeshine2006

thanks all... i'm fine.  not wishing, just knowing it will all be fine!
Moonkist
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5 posted 07-11-2008 07:56 AM       View Profile for Moonkist   Email Moonkist   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Moonkist

This is so beautiful graeshine! What wonderful hope!
Honeybunch
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6 posted 07-11-2008 02:59 PM       View Profile for Honeybunch   Email Honeybunch   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Honeybunch's Home Page   View IP for Honeybunch

"And those beautiful, burning memories save us
At the times
We need them most."

Yes, indeed they do.  Sometimes it's hard to remember the "beautiful" when it no longer is but ultimately we are all grateful for it.

Enjoyed!
Helen
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Agreed.

·´~`·­»Garapan«­·´~`·

Sunshine
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8 posted 07-11-2008 09:17 PM       View Profile for Sunshine   Email Sunshine   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Sunshine's Home Page   View IP for Sunshine

quote:
There will come a time
When I will smile at
Him


Your poem has a double innuendo.

Which is good.

Because it is meant to be interpreted
and it can be interpreted two ways.

One for the past

and one for the future.

Those who may know you, worry over you,
but darling, no one ever really "knows"
someone.

We believe we know our family; our friends; our acquaintances.

But sometimes, when we don't know ourselves,
is when we know us the best.

Because then we realize that we are all in a flux of learning just who we, and others, are.

Are you the same from day to day?

No.

Neither is anyone else you might encounter.

We are as rock solid as coral;

and we are as fluctuating as the wind.

We shift like the sands and seas;
and we really rely only on those who don't
aver their own gaze upon the unreality of life.

When there is a Come a Time in your life,
as there has been in mine; I know you will
treat it like the lady you are.

love you!




graeshine2006
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9 posted 07-11-2008 09:42 PM       View Profile for graeshine2006   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit graeshine2006's Home Page   View IP for graeshine2006

Moonkist, HOneybunch, Gar, and Aunt Karilea... thanks for the comments and support.  Love ya for it!
Richy
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Those memories we save away in our beloved’s bank
do come in handy don’t they when our passion’s impoverished
and we don’t even have enough to make hearts meet.

Yes, sad are the moments, when we want only for whispers, said softly to our soul.
I think we can all relate with this.

Don't ever stop smiling Deb.

graeshine2006
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11 posted 07-11-2008 11:26 PM       View Profile for graeshine2006   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit graeshine2006's Home Page   View IP for graeshine2006

Richy:

                    

Thank you.
LindsayP
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12 posted 07-12-2008 12:19 AM       View Profile for LindsayP   Email LindsayP   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for LindsayP


Debra that is so good, such a sweet poem

It touches the heart strings. Love to you

my dear.

Lindsay
Earth Angel
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Your Aunt Karilea is a very wise ~ and caring ~ woman! ~ as is her niece!

May all be well with you ~ and keep smiling your beautiful smile!

Giving you a warm hug of understanding,

EA


graeshine2006
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14 posted 07-12-2008 09:24 AM       View Profile for graeshine2006   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit graeshine2006's Home Page   View IP for graeshine2006

Lindsay - I'm really glad you liked it.  That means a lot.

Angel - THank you for the kind words also.  It's posts like these that are humbling but OH, so very addictive... lol....
Margherita
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Eternity


15 posted 02-23-2009 09:40 AM       View Profile for Margherita   Email Margherita   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Margherita

Hello, dear Debra, you are missed on Pip!

I just realized you were born on the same day as me, February 21st,  (you are much younger of course!), so I want to wish you a very Happy belated Birthday!

It would be nice to have you back on here. You are loved.

Love and hugs.
Margherita
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