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Come a Time |
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graeshine2006 Member
since 2008-06-03
Posts 368The Prairie Lands, USA 
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There will come a time When I will smile at Him And he will know the artwork Of the angels by his side. There will come a time When he will whisper he loves Me And I will know the tearful joy Of a whisper meant for me. There may come a time When stubborn ways come between Us But we survive to learn Building up that which made us. for There came a time When we felt our love with Bodies, Mind, and Spirit And those beautiful, burning memories save us At the times We need them most. |
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BluesSerenade Member Patricius
since 2001-10-23
Posts 10549By the Seaside |
Beautifully said, graeshine~ Honest and true love will survive every storm and outlast a lifetime. |
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Marchmadness Member Rara Avis
since 2007-09-16
Posts 9271So. El Monte, California |
I hope you find what you are looking for, Debra. Ida |
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Prasad Nataraj Senior Member
since 2008-05-29
Posts 1149Bangalore,India |
Hi Deb, I wish for better times ahead for you… nice write. Prasad |
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graeshine2006 Member
since 2008-06-03
Posts 368The Prairie Lands, USA |
thanks all... i'm fine. not wishing, just knowing it will all be fine! |
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Moonkist Member
since 2006-09-29
Posts 197Pennsylvania |
This is so beautiful graeshine! What wonderful hope! |
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Honeybunch Member Rara Avis
since 2001-12-29
Posts 7115South Africa |
"And those beautiful, burning memories save us At the times We need them most." Yes, indeed they do. Sometimes it's hard to remember the "beautiful" when it no longer is but ultimately we are all grateful for it. Enjoyed! Helen |
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XGarapanX Senior Member
since 2008-06-19
Posts 1435Antarctica |
Agreed. ·´~`·»Garapan«·´~`· |
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Sunshine
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
quote: Your poem has a double innuendo. Which is good. Because it is meant to be interpreted and it can be interpreted two ways. One for the past and one for the future. Those who may know you, worry over you, but darling, no one ever really "knows" someone.  We believe we know our family; our friends; our acquaintances. But sometimes, when we don't know ourselves, is when we know us the best. Because then we realize that we are all in a flux of learning just who we, and others, are. Are you the same from day to day? No. Neither is anyone else you might encounter. We are as rock solid as coral; and we are as fluctuating as the wind. We shift like the sands and seas; and we really rely only on those who don't aver their own gaze upon the unreality of life. When there is a Come a Time in your life, as there has been in mine; I know you will treat it like the lady you are. love you!  |
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graeshine2006 Member
since 2008-06-03
Posts 368The Prairie Lands, USA |
Moonkist, HOneybunch, Gar, and Aunt Karilea... thanks for the comments and support. Love ya for it!  |
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Richy Member Elite
since 2003-05-03
Posts 3050 |
Those memories we save away in our beloved’s bank do come in handy don’t they when our passion’s impoverished and we don’t even have enough to make hearts meet. Yes, sad are the moments, when we want only for whispers, said softly to our soul. I think we can all relate with this. Don't ever stop smiling Deb. |
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graeshine2006 Member
since 2008-06-03
Posts 368The Prairie Lands, USA |
Richy: Thank you. |
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LindsayP Member Elite
since 2007-07-28
Posts 3410Australia, Victoria |
Debra that is so good, such a sweet poem It touches the heart strings. Love to you my dear. Lindsay |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
Your Aunt Karilea is a very wise ~ and caring ~ woman! ~ as is her niece!  May all be well with you ~ and keep smiling your beautiful smile! Giving you a warm hug of understanding, EA  |
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graeshine2006 Member
since 2008-06-03
Posts 368The Prairie Lands, USA |
Lindsay - I'm really glad you liked it. That means a lot. Angel - THank you for the kind words also. It's posts like these that are humbling but OH, so very addictive... lol.... |
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Margherita Member Seraphic
since 2003-02-08
Posts 22236Eternity |
Hello, dear Debra, you are missed on Pip! I just realized you were born on the same day as me, February 21st, (you are much younger of course!), so I want to wish you a very Happy belated Birthday! It would be nice to have you back on here. You are loved. Love and hugs. Margherita |
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