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Wake of Tides
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Wake of Tides |
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BluesSerenade Member Patricius
since 2001-10-23
Posts 10549By the Seaside 
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Lulled by the ebb and flow. Currents pull in the wake of tides. Summer slumbers late in the afternoon. Changing winds buoy the spirit. The sky streaks a naked blaze. My heart soars on the crest of a wave not yet broken. |
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Marchmadness Member Rara Avis
since 2007-09-16
Posts 9271So. El Monte, California |
Oooh, so beautiful. I love the ocean. Ida |
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BluesSerenade Member Patricius
since 2001-10-23
Posts 10549By the Seaside |
Thanks so much for your nice reply, Ida~ |
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Margherita Member Seraphic
since 2003-02-08
Posts 22236Eternity |
Very lovely and enticing, dear Lori. Love, Margherita  |
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BluesSerenade Member Patricius
since 2001-10-23
Posts 10549By the Seaside |
It is in those moments before the heart breaks that is most exhilirating. Like a long ride on the perfect wave that carries you all the way. You are always so generous with your replies, and I appreciate your kindness very much, Margherita. |
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ThisDiamond Member Rara Avis
since 2002-02-22
Posts 9353Michigan, USA |
Pretty requiem. loved the imagery here Bluesy. |
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Honeybunch Member Rara Avis
since 2001-12-29
Posts 7115South Africa |
And may your heart continue to soar, dear Bluesy. I wanna be where you are. It sounds delightful.  Helen |
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XGarapanX Senior Member
since 2008-06-19
Posts 1435Antarctica |
You are a surfer! ·´~`·»Garapan«·´~`· |
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vandana
since 1999-10-22
Posts 10463USA |
nice |
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inkedgoddess Member Rara Avis
since 2002-11-19
Posts 7392Ohio |
yes before the wave is broken , inside the bubble of a dream. The sea looks lovely on you |
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Richy Member Elite
since 2003-05-03
Posts 3050 |
Dear Lori, may you one day find that perfect breaker, that never breaks your ride or, your heart. But if it does, maybe the color of the ocean just wanted to see what the real bluezy looked like. Wonderful to read you once again. Rich |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
Poetess Lori, I am "lulled by the ebb and flow" of your oceanic words. May your heart continue to soar "on the crest of a wave" ~ and never be broken. Giving you a warm, loving hug, Linda  |
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Larry C
since 2001-09-10
Posts 10286United States |
Bluesie, May it be an endless wave. I always like your imagery and how your mind works. Hope all is well.  If tears could build a stairway and memories a lane, |
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rad802 Member
since 2008-04-19
Posts 279KY U.S.A. |
not yet broken nice Rick Delmonico |
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BluesSerenade Member Patricius
since 2001-10-23
Posts 10549By the Seaside |
Ya'll are too kind, and just as sweet as can be. Thank you so much. |
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Magnus
since 2001-10-10
Posts 14135South Carolina, USA |
Now, that dearest Bluesy is soft. Nice! |
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BluesSerenade Member Patricius
since 2001-10-23
Posts 10549By the Seaside |
So glad to see you here this morning. Thank you, Magnus~ |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
beautiful! |
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soul drifter Senior Member
since 2004-09-08
Posts 711Colorado |
"not yet broken" love that ending line. Actually loved the whole piece, very beautiful, but that last line is everything really. A friend once told me she loved the how my work ends, how the endings feel. I think I always appreciate a great ending too, else the rest doesn't work as well. This made me think of that. Anyway, this is wonderful, keep it up "How do the angels get to sleep, when the devil leaves the porchlight on?" -- Tom Waits, 'Mr. Siegal' |
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Dark Stranger Member Patricius
since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631West Coast |
some day bluezy....we need to do coffee your poem is cool |
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BluesSerenade Member Patricius
since 2001-10-23
Posts 10549By the Seaside |
Dixie, thanks for the beautiful and for being so forgiving. Hug~ Appreciate it soul drifter. It's great to see you here, you really should get out more often yanno.  Ok DS~ You buying? |
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threadbear Senior Member
since 2008-07-10
Posts 817Indy |
Reminds me so much of the Dave Mason song: Old Crest on a New Wave. Not a wasted word, Blues Serenade! Excellent! tb |
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BluesSerenade Member Patricius
since 2001-10-23
Posts 10549By the Seaside |
I was kind of leaning towards Electric Light Orchestra. Gotta love Dave Mason too, he's still hot! Thanks for the read, TB~ |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
Lori, forgiveness comes easy when I think about all the mistakes I've made in my life, especially lately I have always loved your poetry, always will. |
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Roniece Dawson-Bruce Member Ascendant
since 2000-01-29
Posts 5689Sydney, Australia |
this is so wonderful! I love how you write Lori.. love RDB Be kind at heart....for everyone you meet has their own battle to fight......... |
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nakdthoughts Member Laureate
since 2000-10-29
Posts 19200Between the Lines |
"My heart soars on the crest of a wave not yet broken." Such lovely writing, Lori. It's always wonderful to be reading your words. M |
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Midnitesun
since 2001-05-18
Posts 28647Gaia |
 Bluesygal, I'm adding my thank you for such an uplifting write! |
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BluesSerenade Member Patricius
since 2001-10-23
Posts 10549By the Seaside |
Hugs Dixie~ Roniece~ I am delighted to see you here, thanks so much. Thank you Maureen~ How odd that those little heartbreakers that once turned my world upside down, would end up inspiring me. que sera~ Hey Kacy~ Thank YOU for thanking me. Always nice to have you here. |
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Greeneyes 
since 2000-09-09
Posts 9903In Your Poetic Mind |
such a lovely wave to be on....beautiful lori! ~~**~~ |
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BluesSerenade Member Patricius
since 2001-10-23
Posts 10549By the Seaside |
It does my heart good to see you here Lauren. Many thanks to you, girl friend~ |
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