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Roniece Dawson-Bruce
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0 posted 2008-07-10 11:08 PM





Because you said
You cared
Because you smiled
On a day
That was oh so sad for me
Because you listened
To my heart breaking
And still you stayed
To hold my hand
To smile my day
Thank you
It’s you I thank
For keeping me safe
For knowing who I am
For being who you are
On a day that sadness reigned

Be kind at heart....for everyone you meet has their own battle to fight.........

© Copyright 2008 Roniece Dawson-Bruce - All Rights Reserved
Mr. Omniscient
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1 posted 2008-07-10 11:15 PM


I enjoyed this. Great write.
Robert E. Jordan
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2 posted 2008-07-10 11:15 PM


Dear RDB,

There is a nice thought process in this poem.

Bobby

graeshine2006
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3 posted 2008-07-10 11:20 PM


Very touching words, written lovely.
Marchmadness
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4 posted 2008-07-11 12:55 PM


Nice to have someone there, Roniece. Lovely acknowledgement.
                               Ida

Margherita
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5 posted 2008-07-11 05:53 AM


Not forgetting what we receive and expressing our gratitude is one of the most beautiful heart motions that I know of.

And you always have deeply touching words to express this, dear Roniece!

Love and hugs.
Margherita

Dark Stranger
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6 posted 2008-07-11 06:50 AM


ms r&b, it is nice to see your pen here this way
2islander2
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7 posted 2008-07-11 10:38 AM


Thank you Roniece, I share your thoughts about smiles communion....This poem say the essential...Now let the winds take out the dark clouds...

have a nice day

   yann

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8 posted 2008-07-11 03:13 PM


So wonderful to have someone special with you on a sad day.  A lovely "thank you".

Helen

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9 posted 2008-07-11 03:35 PM


Enjoyed. You wrote such a heartfelt piece. Very touching.

~Jill

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10 posted 2008-07-11 04:22 PM


RDB,

Just sending my love and thoughts your way.

xoxoxo
Ali

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11 posted 2008-07-11 05:51 PM


A very sad and beautiful sentiment.

·´~`·­»Garapan«­·´~`·

LindsayP
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12 posted 2008-07-12 12:28 PM



Roniece my good friend, it is a wonderful

blessing to have a good friend who is there

to help you when they are needed. great post

A big hug to you my dear and keep the chin up. Love

Lindsay

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13 posted 2008-07-12 08:42 AM


My dear RDB, you are truly worthy of someone sharing and caring because that is who you, yourself, are all about! Light attracts Light!

May your sorrows never cloud your tomorrows.

With love,
Linda

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14 posted 2008-07-15 12:41 PM


Hugs and kisses my friend.  I love this poem and it needs to pop right back at the top.

xoxoxo
A

JamesMichael
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15 posted 2008-07-15 03:20 AM


There are special angels...James
Roniece Dawson-Bruce
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16 posted 2008-07-15 04:34 AM


thank you everyone... I really do appreciate your lovely comments...  love RDB

thank you Ali-girl... you are so precious to me!  love RDB

Be kind at heart....for everyone you meet has their own battle to fight.........

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17 posted 2008-07-18 11:25 AM


Touching!



ARCTIC WIND

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18 posted 2008-08-15 02:38 AM


this is special
Prasad Nataraj
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19 posted 2008-08-15 03:00 PM


Remembering a friend who stood for you is such a  wonderful thought. Nice write. Prasad

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