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nakdthoughts
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Between the Lines

0 posted 2008-07-10 06:58 PM



Always running behind
trying to catch up
to where I was yesterday~~


M

"Love is not blind - It sees more and not less, but because it sees more, it is willing to see less."
(Will Moss)

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Mr. Omniscient
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1 posted 2008-07-10 11:07 PM


Very nice. Always enjoy a twist.
BluesSerenade
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2 posted 2008-07-10 11:17 PM


Hi Maureen,
Like I said before, chasing our own tale (the stories of our life) can be exhausting.

So sorry,  had to come back and edit my "tale"  


Love your less thans~

[This message has been edited by BluesSerenade (07-11-2008 01:15 AM).]

Marchmadness
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3 posted 2008-07-11 01:01 AM


Me too, Maureen. All that running needed a poetic voice.
             Ida

Margherita
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4 posted 2008-07-11 08:04 AM


I know you speak for many with this exceptional offering, dear Maureen.

... I can't but insist to live in the Now, it's the only real canvas we have to paint our life upon.

Love,
Margherita

nakdthoughts
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5 posted 2008-07-11 09:31 AM


thanks everyone, I appreciate your  thoughts~~ and Margherita you wouldn't want to be living in  my "now".

M

Margherita
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6 posted 2008-07-11 11:32 AM


Dear Maureen, I understand it must be tough and I am sorry! Probably there are things in my own "now" that you wouldn't want to bear either, but I think we (me included) never realize enough that we have the power to change many things, if we face the challenges coming up. But we often prefer to escape the "now" either by clinging to the past or dreaming of a better future.
Wishing you from my heart to heal your "now"!
Love and hugs.
Margherita

nakdthoughts
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7 posted 2008-07-11 01:26 PM


Thank you again, Margherita. I am fine~~ just trying to post every now and then so as not to become too stale.

Besides, one can only control so many things in their life...the rest "just is" and will take time to readjust (if it does at all).


M

XGarapanX
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8 posted 2008-07-11 06:29 PM


Perfect.

·´~`·­»Garapan«­·´~`·

vandana
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9 posted 2008-07-11 06:40 PM


good one
passing shadows
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10 posted 2008-07-13 11:44 PM


I know the feeling

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