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Open Poetry #43

a tangled web

Danny Cobb
Member

since 2008-07-09

Posts 74

0 posted 2008-07-10 05:32 PM

how
easy
it is to
get started at
the sisnter practice
of trying to deceive
yet wanting to believe
we master our own fate
and have our own way
becoming what
we are not
but just
no good
dust
!!!

Mr. Omniscient
Member

since 2006-10-28

Posts 134

1 posted 2008-07-10 11:10 PM

So potent. Very nice. Keep writing your thoughts.

BluesSerenade
Member Patricius

since 2001-10-23

Posts 10549
By the Seaside

2 posted 2008-07-10 11:15 PM

You wrote some hard truths, there's a lesson here for sure.

Welcome to passions, Danny~

Marchmadness
Member Rara Avis

since 2007-09-16

Posts 9271
So. El Monte, California

3 posted 2008-07-11 01:04 AM

You have a unique style of writing, Danny.
I like it, it is different.
Ida

Prasad Nataraj
Senior Member

since 2008-05-29

Posts 1149
Bangalore,India

4 posted 2008-07-11 02:53 AM

Hi Danny, truly said and powerful. Nice write. Prasad

Alison

Member Rara Avis

since 2008-01-27

Posts 9318
Lumpy oatmeal makes me crazy!

5 posted 2008-07-11 11:42 PM

I liked this one too.

A

passing shadows
Member Empyrean

since 1999-08-26

Posts 45577
displaced

6 posted 2008-07-13 11:45 PM

true

good one!

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