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Reflection |
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marcel Senior Member
since 2003-03-02
Posts 660az, usa |
Reflection Please forgive my aberration’s transgression Inserting this moment before your next thought Capturing your hesitation will be my inspiration Forging red sunsets into a summer time has wrought Luring dreaming teddy bears to a bee’s subtle smile As sleeping children awake to morning fog To the envy of a mislead souls denial Their stories written in unseen blogs Just to be a figment of the wind’s imagination A brisk kiss to your ear that becomes a whisper A moment to insert your next thought of liberation Into a mind that searches for his own admiration. Marcel |
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Ericc Member Elite
since 2003-01-31
Posts 4178 |
Excellent write! Eric |
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ThisDiamond Member Rara Avis
since 2002-02-22
Posts 9353Michigan, USA |
Courage comes, as dawn In platinum sky, serene in it's creation The thoughts stirred, flip and feather Folding down, one to another As heaven opens, and the hand of God Becomes clear Copyright Kkh 7/11/08 Thanks for the inspiration  |
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Moonkist Member
since 2006-09-29
Posts 197Pennsylvania |
Most excellent, indeed! |
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BluesSerenade Member Patricius
since 2001-10-23
Posts 10549By the Seaside |
Unbelievably well done, marcel~ So glad I scrolled down to read this. That's some mighty fine inspiration you have!!!! much enjoyed this~ |
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