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Dedications Part Two
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Dedications Part Two |
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A Beautiful Disaster Member
since 2007-01-13
Posts 409 |
1. My love and your tempting indifference Were parallel roads, however, They crossed once in two different places. I get it. It doesn't make sense. Two roads - two fatal collisions: Both times you survived and I fainted. This road would bring me to nowhere, Just like this forgotten romance. 2. My love was a one-way road, It was only a matter of time: Black and white days and sleepless nights, Multiplied by my pain and pride And divided to those strong drinks Washing tears and thoughts away. But I counted this all wrong, Now I'm paying for my mistakes. It was morning without the dawn, It was grief with no sign, or a song With no music, no verses, no end, But my voice was too loud and strong. 3. I'm not a moment - I'm a muse. I'm life itself - you're its reflection. But you're too blind to see the truth Through ghostly rays of your perfection. I'm not a slave of destiny - I am above, I'm its creator. I've always been a mystery, And you're nothing more than haters. |
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Danny Cobb Member
since 2008-07-09
Posts 74 |
It is interesting how your form changes as you get more intense and involved in the writting as it no longer mattered if it did have form--for only raw and jagged edges of emotion where there being battered around. Very Good, Danny |
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