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Open Poetry #43
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Huan Yi
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0 posted 2008-07-09 08:16 PM

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You’ve already got
That mosquito spider

Just settle down
And eat


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serenity blaze
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1 posted 2008-07-09 11:20 PM

Did I read this before?

I feel like I did, and I liked it then, and like it better now.

I love your work.
Huan Yi
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2 posted 2008-07-10 10:36 AM


SB

Thanks

No, it was written one minute
before posted.

Thanks again

John
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3 posted 2008-07-11 04:03 PM

Oooh! Reminds me of an old old movie I saw as a kid. This little human fly thingy was caught in a spider web crying out, "HeEeEeeEeEeLlLlLlLpPpPppP mMmmmeEeEeEee!!!.....

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Lumpy oatmeal makes me crazy!
4 posted 2008-07-19 03:10 AM

I like it.

Alison
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