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OLIAS
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since 2000-06-20
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Pearl city Iowa

0 posted 2008-07-09 11:19 AM



Inspired by Huan Yi's post, thank you sir.

Spider (Acrostic)

Twitching, expectations maw,
humbly clutching silken thread,
enticing, mother natures law,
faultless spinner of the dead,
lost in games, you play so well,
you lie in wait, for what? pray tell.

OLIAS.

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Earth Angel
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since 2002-08-27
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Realms of Light
1 posted 2008-07-09 01:13 PM


Hello, OLIAS. Spiders give me the creepy crawlies! You certainly gave me a goosebumple or two with your vividly descriptive acrostic! ~ and t h e  f l y doesn't have a chance!

"Twitching, expectations maw,
humbly clutching silken thread,
enticing, mother natures law,
faultless spinner of the dead,
lost in games, you play so well,
you lie in wait, for what? pray tell."

Eeeks! and Egads! ~ yer good! Well done!


EA

OLIAS
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Pearl city Iowa
2 posted 2008-07-09 02:14 PM


Thanks for your kind words Earth Angel
Regards Olias.

Marchmadness
Member Rara Avis
since 2007-09-16
Posts 9271
So. El Monte, California
3 posted 2008-07-11 12:38 PM


I find spiders facinating and this poem is not bad either.
                                Ida

OLIAS
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Pearl city Iowa
4 posted 2008-07-11 01:58 AM


Thanks Marchmadness for your kind words

Regards
OLIAS

Honeybunch
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since 2001-12-29
Posts 7115
South Africa
5 posted 2008-07-11 03:11 PM


Spiders certainly aren't my best thing in life but I can handle reading a good poem!  Well done!

Helen

XGarapanX
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since 2008-06-19
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Antarctica
6 posted 2008-07-11 05:57 PM


Bravo! Me likey.

·´~`·­»Garapan«­·´~`·

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