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rmorrow11
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0 posted 2008-07-09 12:47 PM



Why is it so hard?
Coming and going, swapping and trying?
Someone should make a warning label for the birds..
I've Listened to random thoughts, Marveled at great height dreams..
"Whats next", seems a very quotable phrase...
"I think this is the one", yeah, I'm sure...
This is never "the one", until it is, plain and simple......
What's next for the one in doubt?, probably a bunch more crap to piece together....
So yeah, I'm done, no more wisecracks no more witty remarks, no more laughing aloud and definitely no more front man...All of which will only get one noticed. I'll keep it to myself cause it's all a waste of time..
What's the moral here? I guess it's whatever you'd like it to be. I don't have answer and I'm all out of wise..

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Margherita
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Eternity
1 posted 2008-07-09 07:41 AM


I would say no, it's not a waste of time if you bring joy to others, while laughing loud, making witty remarks etc. ... It is interaction, reaching out, connecting and you can't do anything of greater value.

So go tap some shoulder and cheer up who is just waiting for you. Enjoyed your first entry.

Welcome to Pip!

Love,
Margherita

OLIAS
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2 posted 2008-07-09 09:16 AM


Welcome to Pip.
Interesting first post, it makes me ponder, thanks for the write.

Regards,
OLIAS

Dark Stranger
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3 posted 2008-07-09 09:23 AM


Welcome 2morrow. Enjoyed your message
Sunshine
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Listening to every heart
4 posted 2008-07-09 11:16 AM


...and I'm all out of wise.

Boy, does that hit a mark.

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Earth Angel
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5 posted 2008-07-09 01:25 PM


Hi, there! Welcome to pipTalk's "circle of friends"!

This poem is for the birds! ~ Forgive me, I have a weird sense of humour!

"I don't have answer and I'm all out of wise."

~ You too?!? lol

Giving you a warm, welcoming pip hug of love,

Earth Angel

FastForward
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since 2008-06-29
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6 posted 2008-07-09 03:31 PM


Warning Label For Birds

I don't know what you wrote after this, because my thoughts were lost on very humorous things!

Thanks for the inspiration!

vandana
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7 posted 2008-07-09 05:53 PM


welcome to passions enjoyed
BluesSerenade
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By the Seaside
8 posted 2008-07-12 04:58 PM


I think this is the one", yeah, I'm sure...
This is never "the one", until it is, plain and simple......

~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~

Boy do I get this, plain and simple can be frustrating,
and I'm all out of patience and wise as well.  
I've pretty much stopped wondering where I went wrong
when it seemed to right.  

Welcome to the blue pages~

XGarapanX
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Antarctica
9 posted 2008-07-14 11:21 PM


This was a thoughtful and intelligent reflection.

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