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Between Leaf and Lost Foliage
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Between Leaf and Lost Foliage |
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inkedgoddess Member Rara Avis
since 2002-11-19
Posts 7392Ohio 
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Was a fifth into the season when your walls became cluttered with backgrounds of cartons, the leafless dark windows crying out for their christening you were fresh to the town pants frayed and loneley eyed, slowly unpacking the storms of a past life I gave you 5 candles a brown bag of yuengling and 2 or 3 ribbons of welcome and come dance with me we spread our desires on the scratched parquet floors where we chisled my heels as I nailed on all fours i guess I slept late when the crosswinds blew round again in a courting of foliage in the color of carnivals as I froze in those months of cold moons and brisk symphonies when we spackled our portraits in the blanks of the ink spots and my tippy toe pleas of 'stay warm' and keep in touch with me" but it halted on walls, waterwashed in lukewarm though im wishing mood, whimsical about painting them pretty, all dots reconnected in a summertime sizzle. [This message has been edited by inkedgoddess (07-10-2008 08:21 AM).] |
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serenity blaze Member Empyrean
since 2000-02-02
Posts 27738 |
Ah .... "i gave you 5 candles a brown bag of yuengling and 2 or 3 dashes of welcome and come dance with me" That, m'lovely, is the grandest welcome. It's been so long since I've had some of that, I may have to MOVE--near you.  Beautiful! |
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Margherita Member Seraphic
since 2003-02-08
Posts 22236Eternity |
Poetess Michele, I am always fascinated by your unique style. Thank you for this extraordinary write. Love, Margherita  |
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OLIAS Senior Member
since 2000-06-20
Posts 1090Pearl city Iowa |
Very cool stylish write, this brings out the yin and the yang of emotion... which is always a good thing, much enjoyed, a keeper. Regards OLIAS. |
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Dark Stranger Member Patricius
since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631West Coast |
Michinki. You unbutton the windows with bare fingers that still taste like you just licked them. A treat to read your wounds! |
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Dark Stranger Member Patricius
since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631West Coast |
Michinki. You unbutton the windows with bare fingers that still taste like you just licked them. A treat to read your wounds! |
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OwlSA Member Rara Avis
since 2005-11-07
Posts 9347Durban, South Africa |
Lovely as always, Michele. I hope that those dots do get (re)connected in a summertime romance! - Owl |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
Goddess, you are so creatively expressive! ~ and romantic! May a summer romance be rolling in with the next gentle breeze!   Linda |
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vandana
since 1999-10-22
Posts 10463USA |
good read |
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inkedgoddess Member Rara Avis
since 2002-11-19
Posts 7392Ohio |
thanks for the looksie |
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BluesSerenade Member Patricius
since 2001-10-23
Posts 10549By the Seaside |
i guess I slept late when the crosswinds blew round again in a courting of foliage in the color of carnivals as I froze in those months of cold moons ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~ Especially love those lines up there. You and your writing gets better all the time. Nice one, good goddess~ |
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Marchmadness Member Rara Avis
since 2007-09-16
Posts 9271So. El Monte, California |
Here's to summer! Michele. Ida |
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XGarapanX Senior Member
since 2008-06-19
Posts 1435Antarctica |
Definitely what everyone else has already said- creative, unique, expressive. ·´~`·»Garapan«·´~`· |
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