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Huan Yi
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0 posted 2008-07-08 09:10 PM


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Good God
Look at that
Busy spider

Just who or what
This summer night
Is it trying to catch


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Lumpy oatmeal makes me crazy!
1 posted 2008-07-08 10:00 PM


John,

I love this one.

A

secondhanddreampoet
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2 posted 2008-07-09 06:30 AM


perhaps his vaulted ambition is to snag the moon?!

applause for this 'penning'!

Margherita
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3 posted 2008-07-09 07:04 AM


He knows his purpose in life! Free John from mosquitos!!

Spiders, spiderweb ... a close look will unveil the incredible ways of nature and make us wonder ... and that is quite a deed: to make humans wonder!

You wonder beautifully!
Love,
Margherita

OLIAS
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4 posted 2008-07-09 10:44 AM


Great write here, I'm am inspired, Thank you sir.

Regards,
OLIAS

FastForward
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5 posted 2008-07-09 03:54 PM


Oh how I love to see a spider at work on her web.  I said "her web".  does that make me a sexist?

Enjoyed this!

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6 posted 2008-07-09 05:50 PM


enjoyed
XGarapanX
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7 posted 2008-07-11 04:00 PM


My spider poems usually just go, "SPLAT!" But that's me.

·´~`·­»Garapan«­·´~`·

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8 posted 2008-07-11 06:33 PM


::smiles::     yes     It caught you
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