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ThisDiamond
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0 posted 2008-07-08 05:40 PM



Tender Interchange

The touch of your fingers to the keys
Divulge each weary mile wrung from semi colon eyes
And these, when carefully, you speak into my perceptions
Angling each quiet hour between us, glistening inceptions
Your stare, deep into the screen, into my heart
Waiting there, until my grasp is gold
An ocean of affection to unfold
Waiting as I do, a tilt and kindred point of view

As I’ve been weary too, pushing time into brass
Molding mountains in good taste for time to pass
Saving moments, polished up and tagged by hand
Spent to adore the more when chance relents unplanned
There, along the resonance of softly spoken kind
We meet, at some grand point preplanned, yet undefined
Where my touch strikes the keys, in thrilled familiar spell
Foretelling future hopes and dreams, that inner oceans well

Between us, swirls the spring, intersecting everything
The works of which, though strange, dissolve in tender interchange

Copyright Kkh 7/8/08

© Copyright 2008 Kathleen Harris - All Rights Reserved
Earth Angel
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1 posted 2008-07-08 05:48 PM


TD, I'm pleased that this gem got moved to the new forum! It would be a shame for this one not to be in full view in 43!

I found myself dissolving as I read this tender interchange...

Love to you, Ms Loving!
Linda

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2 posted 2008-07-08 07:44 PM


Kathleen~
I am SO GLAD to see that you reposted this one so quickly in the new forum ... it's happened before ... we post one in the current Open and *POOF* another one opens without warning ... and anything THIS LOVELY deserves all the reads it can get instead of taking a plummet in what will soon become an 'archived' forum~

Lovely, lovely, lovely~
You are as beautiful as the words you pen~

*Huglets*
~*Marge*~

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3 posted 2008-07-08 08:18 PM


::smiles::    nice    so very nice
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4 posted 2008-07-08 10:09 PM


So lovely - truly a Diamond written by a Diamond.  Thank you for moving it for us.

Alison

Artic Wind
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5 posted 2008-07-08 10:56 PM


LOVELY!



ARCTIC WIND

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6 posted 2008-07-09 08:31 PM


Joy shines through every word. Amazing.
Ericc
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7 posted 2008-07-10 03:54 PM


Deeply beautiful.

Eric

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8 posted 2008-07-11 03:07 PM


Stunning write, TD!  Greatly enjoyed!

Helen

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9 posted 2008-07-11 05:56 PM


Amazingly beautiful writing.

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