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Robert E. Jordan
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0 posted 2008-07-08 09:33 AM


Angelo shoots hoops
well past midnight.  

The thump-thump-thump
dulls his senses.  

He’s all alone on the court.  
He doesn’t have to think
about what’s going down at home.

Thump-thump-thump.

Bobby

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Marchmadness
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1 posted 2008-07-08 10:25 AM


Angelo was lucky to have a distraction.
                              Ida

Robert E. Jordan
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2 posted 2008-07-08 12:24 PM


Yes dear Ida,

Able bodied boys are fortunate that way.

Bobby

Earth Angel
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3 posted 2008-07-08 04:41 PM


Those thumps echo right into my heart.


Linda

Robert E. Jordan
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4 posted 2008-07-08 04:50 PM


Thanks dear Linda,

I'm pleased this poem worked for you.

Yes, the thump-thump-thump does sound like a heart beating.  It's a sad thing for Angelo, being out there all alone.  He can’t go home.

Bobby

XGarapanX
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5 posted 2008-07-09 09:14 PM


Sounds like something I used to do.

·´~`·­»Garapan«­·´~`·

Robert E. Jordan
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6 posted 2008-07-09 09:37 PM


Thanks XGarapanX,

Good for you.  Shooting hoops is a good thing to do.  It's a great distraction.

Bobby

2islander2
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since 2008-03-12
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by the sea
7 posted 2008-07-10 03:19 PM


Thank you Bobby, all my youth I played soccer or tennis with friends when i had some time, It was a really good time....

have a nice day

   yann

Earl Brinkman
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8 posted 2010-09-21 10:32 PM


Shooting hoops is a good way for kids to survive in bad neighborhoods.
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