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JamesMichael
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0 posted 2008-07-07 07:35 PM


My Heart In Her Fingertips

In my dreams
I dreamed of my honey
lying in bed next to me
gracing me and embracing me
wihin her silky luxury
and when I awoke
I smelled her perfume
the essence of her
filling the room,
for all through
this night
she was laying
right next to me
and as she wished me
a good morning and
kissed my lips she
held my heart in
her fingertips.

JamesLee
05July
2008



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Marge Tindal
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1 posted 2008-07-07 08:45 PM


JamesMichael~
Totally breathtaking~

*BIG SIGHS*

*Huglets*
~*Marge*~

~*The sound of a kiss is not as strong as that of a cannon, but it's echo endures much longer*~
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2 posted 2008-07-07 09:03 PM


oh yeah...lots and lots of sighs from this one loved it James
LindsayP
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3 posted 2008-07-08 12:17 PM



A very sweet poem James

I loved it.

Lindsay

2islander2
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4 posted 2008-07-08 02:37 AM


Awesome James, you speak so well of love.

yann

Roniece Dawson-Bruce
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5 posted 2008-07-08 04:29 AM


just smiles and says 'beautiful' my lovely James... such a pleasure to read your work.. love RDB

Be kind at heart....for everyone you meet has their own battle to fight.........

passing shadows
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6 posted 2008-07-08 09:06 AM


awwww

that's so romantic!

XGarapanX
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7 posted 2008-07-09 05:38 PM


I can't imagine a lovlier thing to say to a woman. Wonderful.

·´~`·­»Garapan«­·´~`·

JamesMichael
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8 posted 2008-07-10 06:03 AM


Thank you Marge, Sea, Lindsay, 2islander2, Roniece, passing and XGarapanX for the wonderful responses...James
faithmairee
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9 posted 2011-01-07 03:14 PM


ah, how romantic!  what a lovely, free flowing poem...i think it's great!


faith

There must be a poem in here somewhere.

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