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Topheth
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0 posted 2008-07-07 05:45 PM


The day’s a little darker
without your shining eyes
to share a smile,
to laugh a while
and enjoy what our distance denies.

But night’s a whole lot brighter
wrapped up within your arms,
secret pleasure,
little treasure,
and surrendered to all your charms.

Dawn to day to dusk to night –
always in thought if not in sight.


"You inspire; I desire – and refrain; you sustain."

[This message has been edited by Topheth (07-07-2008 07:48 PM).]

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with you
1 posted 2008-07-07 05:46 PM


"Dawn to day to dusk to night –
always in thought if not in sight."


this is so sweet

A Romantic Heart
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2 posted 2008-07-07 06:31 PM


But night’s a whole lot brighter
wrapped up within your arms,
secret pleasure,
little treasure,
and surrender to all your charms.

My favorite lines....

ooo la la.....lol!

scoff
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since 2008-07-04
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3 posted 2008-07-07 07:29 PM


I hope the object of your desire appreciates you. Devotion so complete should be admirably rewarded. Very nicely done.
Topheth
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4 posted 2008-07-07 07:56 PM


Thank you, each, for your gracious comments.
graeshine2006
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5 posted 2008-07-07 11:19 PM


heavy sigh......  
passing shadows
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displaced
6 posted 2008-07-08 09:08 AM


another *sigh*
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