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OLIAS
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0 posted 2008-07-07 03:24 PM



Fragments of Mayberry

To find again that Mayberry day replete,
a gentle sway ‘neath peeling ivies twine,
all sweetness sour , diminished by the heat,
but still, absinthe for memories decline.
So pendulous as time unwound am I,
the back swing so much better than the fore,
perhaps rose tinted fancies hold my eye,
to walk nostalgic avenues once more,
a mirage of that innocence unbound,
which dissipates as dust, in sun beams haze,
till stark reality pervades the ground,
a jaded bitter sight, that steals my gaze.

Oh sorrow wells, tis more than I can say,
to find then lose, that perfect Mayberry day.

[This message has been edited by OLIAS (07-09-2008 11:22 AM).]

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1 posted 2008-07-07 03:35 PM


We all long far a Mayberry, Olias. You express that longing so well.
                                 Ida

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2 posted 2008-07-07 05:32 PM


"So pendulous as time unbound am I,
the back swing so much better than the fore,
perhaps rose tinted fancies hold my eye,
to walk nostalgic avenues once more,
a mirage of that innocence unbound,"

oh yes....

really feeling this

well done!

scoff
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since 2008-07-04
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3 posted 2008-07-07 06:30 PM


This one reaches out and draws the reader in. Magic is what it is.
OLIAS
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4 posted 2008-07-08 12:23 PM


thank you for your kind comments, be well

regards OLIAS

JamesMichael
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5 posted 2008-07-09 05:29 AM


Enjoyed...James
XGarapanX
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6 posted 2008-07-09 08:59 PM


Cool.

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