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rachaelfuchsberger
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0 posted 2008-07-06 01:08 PM


Today is a different day,
And I walk in a different way,
As the earth has a different lay,
And the sun a new ray.

Tonight is a different night,
And I walk in a different light,
As the earth is a different sight,
And the moon a new bright.

This year is a different year,
And I walk a different kind of queer,
As the earth has a different ear,
And the world a new way to hear.

Arana Darkwolf

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OwlSA
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since 2005-11-07
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Durban, South Africa
1 posted 2008-07-06 05:48 PM


I am glad that you are happy again - with reference to your poem, "I, the Betrayer".

- Owl

XGarapanX
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since 2008-06-19
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Antarctica
2 posted 2008-07-09 10:35 AM


Bravo! I like the theme, and the rhyme scheme.

·´~`·­»Garapan«­·´~`·

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