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2islander2
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0 posted 2008-07-06 12:04 PM



The queen of Narnia,
She has a palace of ice ,
thus she cannot warm it,
she has to be cold night and day,
only her wolves warm her thoughts,
she transforms people into statue of ice…
The queen of Narnia
could be as many of people whom I see,
frosty.

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OwlSA
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1 posted 2008-07-06 05:51 PM


Yann, your poem is beautiful, but very sad.  I wish you warmth and happy smiles right now.

- Owl

Marchmadness
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2 posted 2008-07-06 06:40 PM


I've known a few of these "Queens" and  some "Kings" too. sometimes they are just people who are very sad or lonely or maybe
lack communication skills.
I love this series and your poem too.
                              Ida

2islander2
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3 posted 2008-07-07 02:46 AM


Thank you Owl, we all have ups and downs, sometimes I onsider people clever and  the next day they seem so dark and ugly....
I'm glad you did that comment.

  yann

2islander2
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4 posted 2008-07-07 02:49 AM


Thank you Ida, your comment is the occcasion to answer that I read the chronicles of Narnia in english and was delighted as ever...I didn't remember so pleasure in reading since I was 20 years old and read a lot of books..The movies are also delightful...

thank you for your comment.

  yann

XGarapanX
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5 posted 2008-07-09 11:07 AM


This makes me think because, yes, there are so many frosty people, and they seem to have that same look of self-absorbed misery so well portrayed by the actress playing the queen. Icy write.

·´~`·­»Garapan«­·´~`·

2islander2
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6 posted 2008-07-09 01:02 PM


Thank you Garapan, i enjoyed very much your comment and the self absorbed misery you described...I love the chronicles of Narnia too...

have a nice day

   yann

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