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HopeS
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since 2000-12-22
Posts 4596
Perth Western Australia

0 posted 2008-07-05 01:58 PM





Feelings Came To Light

In picturing the dreams
Our minds would persue
Always wishful thinking
While imaginations grew

Words we relied upon
In creative conversation
We followed the paths
To each dreamy location

Feelings came to light
Loving hearts transpired
As we shed inhibitions
Revealling all we desired

Those golden reveries
Our minds eye could see
Thoughts took us there
Visualising every fantasy


Hope©2008


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Margherita
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since 2003-02-08
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Eternity
1 posted 2008-07-05 02:59 PM


quote:
Those golden reveries
Our minds eye could see
Thoughts took us there
Visualising every fantasy



Wonderfully, excitingly romantic, dear Hope! May the present time bring new reason to dream.

I love the picture, I can feel the summer heat and the fresh fragrance of wheat...

Love and hugs.
Margherita

XGarapanX
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since 2008-06-19
Posts 1435
Antarctica
2 posted 2008-07-05 05:06 PM


A romantic dream.

·´~`·­»Garapan«­·´~`·

LindsayP
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since 2007-07-28
Posts 3410
Australia, Victoria
3 posted 2008-07-05 11:29 PM



A sweet poem dear Hope

much enjoyed.

Lindsay

Richy
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since 2003-05-03
Posts 3050

4 posted 2008-07-05 11:44 PM



Now I get it.

Hope, as in Hopeful Romantic!

This was beautiful dear.

I've get to back to nature.

Now thats what I call a picnic!

Yeow!

Richy

Roniece Dawson-Bruce
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since 2000-01-29
Posts 5689
Sydney, Australia
5 posted 2008-07-06 01:16 AM


lovely poem, Hope.. I do so enjoy your work... love RDB

Be kind at heart....for everyone you meet has their own battle to fight.........

JamesMichael
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Kapolei, Hawaii, USA
6 posted 2008-07-06 04:05 AM


Nice little piece of sensuality...James
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