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A Story |
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Spuddette Member
since 2008-07-03
Posts 112England |
Future blew over the land And the land giggled In childish delight And thereafter a period Of sumptuous slumbering -As the land lazily sighed into the binding night- Left her strong and graceful And the Sky wondering Who shall I be In the drowsy time In the loamy doze In the glimmering bright Who shall behold my first light? |
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2islander2 Member Ascendant
since 2008-03-12
Posts 6825by the sea |
Enjoyed it , get out of the slumber and ask precise question: Who shall behold my first light? days can surprise us every time, enjoyed the mysterious atmosphere of your poem. yann |
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Spuddette Member
since 2008-07-03
Posts 112England |
Thankyou. Its sort of my take on Creation. Glad you like it. |
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Marchmadness Member Rara Avis
since 2007-09-16
Posts 9271So. El Monte, California |
"And the land giggled in childish delight" I think this is excellent, Spudette! Ida |
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Margherita Member Seraphic
since 2003-02-08
Posts 22236Eternity |
I am glad I read this one, it is exceptional!! Love, Margherita |
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XGarapanX Senior Member
since 2008-06-19
Posts 1435Antarctica |
Ooh! Magical! ·´~`·»Garapan«·´~`· |
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