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Roniece Dawson-Bruce
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0 posted 2008-07-05 02:52 AM



You are the light that spreads warmth to my heart
You are the candle that shows my heart the light
You are the flame that burns brightly in my soul
You are the embers that glow long after the flame
You are my shelter when my body is weak
You are my rock of Gibraltar when times are tough
You are my reason for loving
You are quite simply
My everything


Be kind at heart....for everyone you meet has their own battle to fight.........
© Copyright 2008 Roniece Dawson-Bruce - All Rights Reserved
A Romantic Heart
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1 posted 2008-07-05 02:54 AM

you are fantastic!

Hugs~ARH
Roniece Dawson-Bruce
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2 posted 2008-07-05 02:55 AM

thank you lovely ARH .. you are really very kind in your wonderful responses.. love RDB

Be kind at heart....for everyone you meet has their own battle to fight.........
Richy
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3 posted 2008-07-05 03:13 AM


You are quite simply
a wonderful poet and friend!

Rich
Roniece Dawson-Bruce
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4 posted 2008-07-05 03:16 AM

thank you lovely Richy...you have made me smile   love RDB

Be kind at heart....for everyone you meet has their own battle to fight.........
2islander2
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5 posted 2008-07-05 04:16 AM

Hi Roniece it is absolutly delicious so refreshing , I will read it twice to benefit from such lovely words...

have a nice day

  yann
Roniece Dawson-Bruce
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6 posted 2008-07-05 04:18 AM

lovely Yann.. you smile me so often with your beautiful work, I'm pleased you enjoyed this... bonne journee...  love RDB

Be kind at heart....for everyone you meet has their own battle to fight.........
JamesMichael
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7 posted 2008-07-05 04:45 AM

A pleasure to read your soft words...James
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8 posted 2008-07-05 04:50 AM

Beautiful write fills my heart with hope and joy thanks for sharing : )
Roniece Dawson-Bruce
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9 posted 2008-07-05 04:54 AM

James and Victor.. thank you .. you are both beautiful in my books... love RDB

Be kind at heart....for everyone you meet has their own battle to fight.........
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10 posted 2008-07-05 04:59 AM

You are
beautiful inside and out
You are
a friend in good times and bad
You are
the light that shines when I should be sleeping.

xoxoxo
A
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11 posted 2008-07-05 05:00 AM

PS

I guess this means I can blame you that I can't sleep.

Peek in my IM, I am hiding.

xoxoxo
Roniece Dawson-Bruce
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12 posted 2008-07-05 05:01 AM

oh my sweet Ali-girl... you are a light in my life and I love you for being here.. thank you ... now, go sleep!!   love RDB xx

Be kind at heart....for everyone you meet has their own battle to fight.........
Margherita
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13 posted 2008-07-05 07:05 AM

Oh, dear Roniece, you sing such a tender lovely tune here, it touches my heart deeply.
Simply wonderful.
Love and hugs.
Margherita
Roniece Dawson-Bruce
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14 posted 2008-07-05 07:16 AM

grazie millie my lovely Margherita... and si, you are right... Ali-girl does have a funny accent but she just can't bring herself to admit it.............   love RDB  

Be kind at heart....for everyone you meet has their own battle to fight.........
OwlSA
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15 posted 2008-07-05 08:53 AM

What a beautiful tribute, Roneice!

- Owl
Robert E. Jordan
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16 posted 2008-07-05 08:57 AM

Yo dear RDB,

This poem makes good use of repetition.

Love Bobby
XGarapanX
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17 posted 2008-07-05 09:12 AM

Simple, sweet.

·´~`·­»Garapan«­·´~`·
LindsayP
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18 posted 2008-07-06 12:28 PM


That was sooo good dear Roniece,

A joy to read, Keep them coming.

Love to you.

Lindsay
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19 posted 2008-07-06 11:20 PM

Loved the warmth and sweet glow to this~

Very pretty poem~
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