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JamesMichael
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0 posted 2008-07-04 05:33 PM


Does Love Die

Sometimes we put love away
wallowing in our sorrow
but love will never fail
tapping on our shoulder
trying again tomorrow.
For love reaches
out to everyone
and can persevere
in any situation.
Love never dies
love repositions.

JamesLee
04July
2008

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ctowen
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1 posted 2008-07-04 06:20 PM


It does seem to hold "grades" ....
   regardless to difficulties or understanding,
   it balances out in the end!!

   .... guess thats why its a rollercoaster? : )

      short and sweet, and loved

  CT

Margherita
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since 2003-02-08
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2 posted 2008-07-04 07:49 PM


I love how you defend love, dear James!

No it does not die, it IS, or it transforms and as you say it "repositions".

Just lovely!

Love,
Margherita

  

XGarapanX
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since 2008-06-19
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3 posted 2008-07-04 08:47 PM


A hope inspiring insight.

·´~`·­»Garapan«­·´~`·

Roniece Dawson-Bruce
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since 2000-01-29
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4 posted 2008-07-04 09:30 PM


James.. I love your thoughts here... such a beautiful gifting... love RDB

Be kind at heart....for everyone you meet has their own battle to fight.........

Richy
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5 posted 2008-07-04 09:40 PM



Dear poet, you answered your question just perfectly.

Ahh, nice to be surrounded by other dreamers, and romantic hopefuls.

Wonderful James!

Happy Fourth!

Aloha,
Rich



Midnitesun
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Gaia
6 posted 2008-07-04 09:48 PM


"love repositions"
Nice turn of phrase, James.

poddarku
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india
7 posted 2008-07-05 12:55 PM


yes, james, love shall never fail. a delightful read
MindBodySoul
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NJ
8 posted 2008-07-05 01:40 AM


Heart felt!  Love remains within... it never dies, just changes with time....

Wonderful James!

Jen--->MindBodySoul

2islander2
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since 2008-03-12
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9 posted 2008-07-05 04:20 AM


Hello James, you have a special way to write, so recognizable and beautiful, it's always a pleasure to read you.

     yann

FastForward
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since 2008-06-29
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10 posted 2008-07-06 12:42 PM


Read this earlier ---- and had to come back for a second read.  Nice.  This is very nice.  I love "half full" views, and "repositions" is definitely a descriptive I will use in the future.  This is so neat.
Honeybunch
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since 2001-12-29
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11 posted 2008-07-07 08:08 AM


"Love never dies
love repositions."

Yes, sometimes within and sometime outside but most times it's restless deep down inside until it's satisfied.


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