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Spuddette
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since 2008-07-03
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England

0 posted 2008-07-04 04:50 PM


Fleshy mounds of pink that stink
Herded
Ambushed
Driven crowd
Dainty little snouts
Sniff the rumps of those in front
Tiny trotters tread
Over the brink.



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nakdthoughts
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since 2000-10-29
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Between the Lines
1 posted 2008-07-04 07:18 PM


not a good thought when I picture this in my mind~~( had to look up your title)


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Margherita
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since 2003-02-08
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Eternity
2 posted 2008-07-04 08:24 PM


This hurts so much, I could cry.

Almost unbearable vision. In a few words a true tragedy ...

Love,
Margherita

XGarapanX
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since 2008-06-19
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Antarctica
3 posted 2008-07-04 09:05 PM


Trotters.

·´~`·­»Garapan«­·´~`·

Spuddette
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since 2008-07-03
Posts 112
England
4 posted 2008-07-05 11:40 AM


Thanks. I used to be a vegetarian and reading this back to myself I wonder why I am not still? I suppose we don't like to face up to things sometimes. x Jan x
Marchmadness
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since 2007-09-16
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So. El Monte, California
5 posted 2008-07-09 10:55 AM


This makes me so happy that I don't eat pork. Good poetry does make an impact.
                                 Ida

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