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i_am_patch!
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0 posted 2008-07-04 04:40 AM



am i here?
do i exists?

do you see me,
standing right in front of you?

can you feel me breathing,
do i move you?


..OR-


am i only a thought?
a mere thought;

without a life,
but just a fantasy..

"all things change, and we must change with them..."

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Margherita
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Eternity
1 posted 2008-07-04 05:13 AM


The energy emitted by thoughts is always perceived!

Love generates love ...

Your inquiring words are lovely.

Love,
margherita

XGarapanX
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since 2008-06-19
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2 posted 2008-07-04 07:48 AM


Provocative thoughts here. I always enjoy it when a poem makes me consider things.

·´~`·­»Garapan«­·´~`·

i_am_patch!
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3 posted 2008-07-04 08:53 AM


thanks for the time and effort to read XGarapanX...

thanks.

   "omnia vincit amor"
LOVE OVERCOMES EVERYTHING

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