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rad802
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since 2008-04-19
Posts 279
KY U.S.A.

0 posted 2008-07-03 07:02 AM


All your dreams are in the past
Don't you love the times you had
But their fading out of view
And your friends are leaving too

Don't you love to be the one
..........................where will you go when you pass from this world
Don't you love to be the one
..........................What will you do now this one's over
Don't you love to be the one
..........................Can't go back and you can't go forward
Don't you love to be the one

When you held it in your hand
Did you try to understand
And did it seem a little strange
How could you know that it would change

Don't you love to be the one
..........................where will you go when you pass from this world
Don't you love to be the one
..........................What will you do now this one's over
Don't you love to be the one
..........................Can't go back and you can't go forward
Don't you love to be the one

There is something you can do
I can help you make it through
I just want to see you smile
Even just a little

Don't you love to be the one
..........................where will you go when you pass from this world
Don't you love to be the one
..........................What will you do now this one's over
Don't you love to be the one
..........................Can't go back and you can't go forward
Don't you love to be the one

Rick Delmonico

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BluesSerenade
Member Patricius
since 2001-10-23
Posts 10549
By the Seaside
1 posted 2008-07-06 11:34 AM


You had me with your title, the first verse, and the chorus.
You are such a talented song writer, radman.
Your words convey the angst of the longing to be loved.

Really nice song you're singing here~


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