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secondhanddreampoet
Member Ascendant

since 2006-11-07

Posts 6394
a 'Universalist' !

0 posted 2008-07-02 08:24 PM

       Dream Lake

Beneath penetrating
  starlight,
(with spirits stirring
  in the breathless wind)
along the far-water edge,
misty willows whisper
to a grand crescent moon,
gliding on the ripple-mirror
interface of heaven and earth…
that is this mountain–forest
lake of finest dreams.

       ---b. e. adams (7/2/08)

A Romantic Heart
Member Ascendant

since 1999-09-03

Posts 5496
Forever In Your Heart

1 posted 2008-07-02 08:38 PM

Sunshine

Administrator

Member Empyrean

since 1999-06-25

Posts 63354
Listening to every heart

2 posted 2008-07-02 08:47 PM

Bruce,

I truly know of
a breathless wind...

and you captured the spirit
of it
so very well.

Kudos!

Robert E. Jordan
Member Rara Avis

since 2008-01-25

Posts 8541
Philadelphia, Pennsylvania

3 posted 2008-07-02 09:27 PM

Secondhanddreampoet,

I think I know this lake. It provides happy memories from long ago.

Bobby

gilead
Senior Member

since 2008-03-10

Posts 1067
nevada, USA

4 posted 2008-07-02 09:31 PM

I will not mar the spell with words, just let the poem draw me into the dream . . .

So delightful!

Art

Midnitesun

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since 2001-05-18

Posts 28647
Gaia

5 posted 2008-07-02 09:45 PM

This conjures up memories of nights at a California lake, with magical loon calls in the background.
Peaceful, comforting, refreshing.

Alison

Member Rara Avis

since 2008-01-27

Posts 9318
Lumpy oatmeal makes me crazy!

6 posted 2008-07-04 03:19 AM

Bruce,

I love how you bring your Dream Lake to my world.

Alison

Margherita
Member Seraphic

since 2003-02-08

Posts 22236
Eternity

7 posted 2008-07-04 03:45 AM

Ever so peaceful and uplifting when we feel the oneness with All there is. Your poem is a wondrous reminder, dear Bruce.

So beautiful!

Love,
Margherita

The Lady
Member Rara Avis

since 2005-12-26

Posts 7634
The Southwest

8 posted 2008-07-04 10:16 AM

Bruce your words whisper themselves around corners and follow me as I go about my day

it's a spell I think

ArtSolstice
Member

since 2007-03-18

Posts 498

9 posted 2008-07-05 10:13 PM

This is almost like seeing Lake Jean again at night. (with trees other than willows, of course) Beautifully written, and greatly enjoyed!

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