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"I WAS MOVING ON.."
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"I WAS MOVING ON.." |
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i_am_patch! Member
since 2008-06-24
Posts 108manila, philippines 
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i was moving on.. but then i had to stop, coz suddenly you were standing there in front of me, smiling, ignoring the pain in my eyes. i was moving on.. til you came again, talking about us, telling me you missed me. when, i never even heard a word from you. i was moving on.. and now youre here, promising more dreams. making it seem, that the old ones were never broken. i was moving on.. with heart bruised and bitter.. but then i had to stop; cause now you're back.. as if you never left me, used me, hurt me.. i was moving on.. til i had to stop.. and hate you, blame you, and fall for you again.. forgive and forget, |
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Richy Member Elite
since 2003-05-03
Posts 3050 |
Hi Patch, welcome to PIP! Really enjoy a poem with a strong ending! Great job here! Rich  |
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graeshine2006 Member
since 2008-06-03
Posts 368The Prairie Lands, USA |
You write honestly... keep that up! Someone told me to write for myself... I have to agree. Kudos! |
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XGarapanX Senior Member
since 2008-06-19
Posts 1435Antarctica |
Here we go. Now I see more vividly what you were saying in the "Dark Poetry" forum, about why you are so adeptly able to relate to my poem, "Undefined". This is just another fork down that same difficult road. ·´~`·»Garapan«·´~`· |
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Marchmadness Member Rara Avis
since 2007-09-16
Posts 9271So. El Monte, California |
Nice writing. Ida |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
yep, I hate it when that happens good write here! |
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