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nakdthoughts
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Between the Lines

0 posted 2008-07-01 02:35 PM


Those Words Unheard

Waiting lately for more than what comes,
Promises, once depended upon.
Slips away, time, the most precious of all.
Trying to climb from the down of the fall.

Where is the wisdom, the hope in the feel
That once filled the mind with moments ideal?
Where does one go when the circles are drawn
and the road to tomorrow winds on and on

To nowhere of knowing where the sunset will find
Intimate memories shared not just in mind.
Been a long journey, too long some would say.
Just day to day living in those words once cliche'.

Between the lines watching the traveling, each word.
Here in the now, mind discussions unheard.

M



"Love is not blind - It sees more and not less, but because it sees more, it is willing to see less."
(Will Moss)

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Ericc
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1 posted 2008-07-01 02:52 PM


Wow...excellent write!

Eric

nakdthoughts
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2 posted 2008-07-01 08:32 PM


So nice to see you, Eric. Thank you for the nice response and for stopping in.


M

XGarapanX
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since 2008-06-19
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3 posted 2008-07-01 08:51 PM


Agreed. Fantastic writing.

·´~`·­»Garapan«­·´~`·

nakdthoughts
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4 posted 2008-07-02 05:00 AM


Garapan, thank you

M

ctowen
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5 posted 2008-07-04 06:43 PM


thoughts .... as naked as the truth presented ....

   you can only be you!!  : )

   CT

OwlSA
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6 posted 2008-07-04 07:21 PM


Achingly sad, but very beautiful, Maureen.

- Owl

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