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rad802
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since 2008-04-19
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0 posted 2008-06-30 08:23 PM


You think I'm only after one thing.
Let me tell you something.
All I want to do
is share my love with you.

Please take this consideration.
Life's a celebration.
Enjoy it while it's here.
Love's nothing to fear.

For the day will come
when your luck will run
out from under you.

You may not see it now,
but you'll know
before your days are through.

Let me take you to a place
where you won't need your faith
to know that love is real.
You've spent too long behind your shield.

You say that you can't endure love.
It's something there's no cure of.
But baby that's not true.
My love could be good for you.

Rick Delmonico

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graeshine2006
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since 2008-06-03
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The Prairie Lands, USA
1 posted 2008-06-30 10:46 PM


Very nice - is this in a song also?
rad802
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since 2008-04-19
Posts 279
KY U.S.A.
2 posted 2008-07-01 06:21 AM


I hear this as a 60's
george Harrison song.
I can play it in my head but I have never recorded it.
Some of the songs I have recorded are at. http://delmonicosweet.fuzz.com/

Rick Delmonico

Margherita
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since 2003-02-08
Posts 22236
Eternity
3 posted 2008-07-01 10:04 AM


Hopefully you will be able to prove it to her. This is lovely.
And delmonico sweet too.

Love,
Margherita

2islander2
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since 2008-03-12
Posts 6825
by the sea
4 posted 2008-07-01 11:12 AM


Nice and hopeful declaration, I hope she will hear that...

A pleasure reading it

yann

nakdthoughts
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since 2000-10-29
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Between the Lines
5 posted 2008-07-01 08:40 PM


"It's something there's no cure of."... that's for sure~~

Enjoyed!
M

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