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Margherita
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0 posted 2008-06-30 07:26 PM






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Mountains plunge their heads

into the untold vastness

of God's universe


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© Copyright 2008 Margherita Rueger - All Rights Reserved
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1 posted 2008-06-30 07:28 PM


What a neat take on these wonderous creations!

Robert E. Jordan
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2 posted 2008-06-30 07:45 PM


Margherita,

This is a nice haiku/picture combination.

Bobby

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3 posted 2008-06-30 07:49 PM


You seem to dip your pen
into god's earthly ink well
conjuring up his images

I enjoyed your haiku.

~JNS

rad802
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4 posted 2008-06-30 07:56 PM


What is haiku?
If you don't mind me asking.

Rick Delmonico

Ericc
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5 posted 2008-06-30 07:56 PM


Perfect.

Love,
Eric

Robert E. Jordan
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6 posted 2008-06-30 08:53 PM


rad802,

If you have "Google", or some other Internet search engine, go there and type "Haiku".

It's a Japanese form of poetry.

Bobby

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7 posted 2008-07-01 03:34 AM


What a lovely, mystical scene and the perfect words to go with it. I've always loved the mountains.
                               Ida

Dark Stranger
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8 posted 2008-07-01 04:03 AM


ms mar...enjoyed this view of your work
Roniece Dawson-Bruce
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9 posted 2008-07-01 06:54 AM


Dear Margherita.. exquisite writing, exquisite pic, exquisitely you!   love RDB

Be kind at heart....for everyone you meet has their own battle to fight.........

2islander2
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10 posted 2008-07-01 07:55 AM


So beautiful Margherita, I'm voiceless...

  yann

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11 posted 2008-07-01 09:08 AM



For some reason this made me think of the phrase,
he, or she, is a mountain of a person.

And that this picture represented all the special people
here at passions.

Dear Margherita, may you always reach for the sky,
and my heavens kiss continue to lay soft upon your spirit

Rich

miscellanea
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12 posted 2008-07-01 09:38 AM


Absolute perfection, Margherita!  I've been drawn to mountains over the last few years, trying to capture their beauty in water color.  Your picture surely captures it well!  Is this one of your pieces of art?  The poem and picture are a perfect duo!

It is wonderful reading your poetry again.

hugs,

cathy

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13 posted 2008-07-01 09:07 PM


Once again you've just blown down doors with a tiny puff.

·´~`·­»Garapan«­·´~`·

Margherita
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14 posted 2008-07-02 11:48 AM


You all bless me with your kindness, thank you!

Love and high mountain consciousness ...

Love,
Margherita

OLIAS
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15 posted 2008-07-02 01:05 PM


The discipline of Haiku, is very difficult in its simplicity and yours is a wonderful example, provoking thought and emotion well done!

Regards OLIAS.

The Lady
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16 posted 2008-07-02 10:55 PM




your mountains live Margherita
exquisite!


LindsayP
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17 posted 2008-07-03 01:12 AM



Loved it Margherita.

Lovely picture lovely words.

Lindsay

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18 posted 2008-07-03 06:02 PM


Margherita, thanks for taking me there!  

- Owl

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19 posted 2008-07-03 08:35 PM


indeed they do.....beautiful....

~~**~~
Life isn't about how to survive the storm, but how to dance in the rain

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20 posted 2008-07-03 09:57 PM


for sure they humble you, don't they...

Enjoyed...

j.

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21 posted 2008-07-03 10:04 PM


Great photo and write!
Artic Wind
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22 posted 2008-07-04 02:36 PM


I love it so much! Margherita!!!!

Just a wonderful ending....



ARCTIC WIND

secondhanddreampoet
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23 posted 2008-07-04 04:09 PM


grand-fine imagery (both poetic and photographic)

serious applause!!

Margherita
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24 posted 2008-07-04 08:02 PM


Thank you dear Poet friends for stopping by and commenting so kindly!


Mountains invite souls

to dance around their high peaks

along with the winds



Love,
Margherita

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25 posted 2008-07-05 02:19 PM


Very nice Margherita...James
2islander2
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26 posted 2008-07-05 02:23 PM


Hello Margherita, I can't be tired of reading it and its stupendous poetry, I love the idea of the mountains plunging their head...
You had a divine inspiration...

thanks again

  yann

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27 posted 2008-07-05 09:35 PM


Margherita,

Your Haiku is absolutely beautiful.  I love mountains and my mountains say that you did them proud, girl friend!

xoxoxo
A

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