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Ericc
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0 posted 2008-06-30 03:40 PM



Snow falls
Lightly –
Yet branches soon bend to the
Weight of storm and time.
In my warmth…I watch,
Grateful for the strength of branches, for the
Lightness and easy fall of snow, and
Even for the weight of time.

Soon the storm will pass…and perhaps
Grown heavy with the grace of their
Burden – branches will snap.
Every moment holds its own perfection.


© Copyright 2008 Eric P McCarty - All Rights Reserved
miscellanea
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since 2004-06-24
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OH
1 posted 2008-06-30 05:15 PM


"Every moment holds its own perfection"

A perfect morsel much enjoyed!

              ~miscellanea~

Margherita
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since 2003-02-08
Posts 22236
Eternity
2 posted 2008-06-30 06:40 PM


Dear Eric, I love the wondrous imagery and the profound message, your Master touch makes this one a rare blending of lightness and fateful power.

Love you,
Margherita

A Romantic Heart
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since 1999-09-03
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Forever In Your Heart
3 posted 2008-06-30 07:50 PM


This moment of yours is
perfection!



~ARH

Marchmadness
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since 2007-09-16
Posts 9271
So. El Monte, California
4 posted 2008-07-01 04:05 AM


Lovely message in your words, Ericc.
                                Ida

XGarapanX
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since 2008-06-19
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Antarctica
5 posted 2008-07-01 09:05 PM


Let me check... Yeah, I think I'm a fan.

·´~`·­»Garapan«­·´~`·

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