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inkedgoddess
Member Rara Avis

since 2002-11-19

Posts 7392
Ohio

0 posted 2008-06-30 07:22 AM

Skating through
rows
of river
in harlequin
dreams

where i glowed
radioactive

flouescent
in tangerine
color

intoxicated
by the voice
of the
night chorus

regally purple
crowned
in a pipedream

fooled again
by the mirror
of faux gold

storms
scattered

bruised
by the neon lights
over rose
colored fields

i am stuck

wrapped around

choked
in thick roots

but my leaves
liberated

roaming third worlds
with fresh coats
of white satin

i am drunk

skunked
in the promise

of rainbows
eternal

strung out
on the cuevo
of carosels

whirling

i repent

a new sapling

yearning
to be born
again

in the sobering
truth

of the evergreen.

[This message has been edited by inkedgoddess (07-01-2008 07:02 AM).]

Richy
Member Elite

since 2003-05-03

Posts 3050

1 posted 2008-06-30 09:01 AM

Dear Goddess,

This was truly amazing.
It spoke to me in so many different levels.
I couldn't have asked for a better poem this morning.

Thank you for that.
I so wish you would write more.
I could use the therapy lol.

You did wonderful!
Rich

Midnitesun

Member Empyrean

since 2001-05-18

Posts 28647
Gaia

2 posted 2008-06-30 09:35 AM

Pure magic!!! What a delightful sensory read!

passing shadows
Member Empyrean

since 1999-08-26

Posts 45577
displaced

3 posted 2008-06-30 09:38 AM

I do wish I could write such wonders

Margherita
Member Seraphic

since 2003-02-08

Posts 22236
Eternity

4 posted 2008-06-30 10:15 AM

quote:
roaming third worlds
with fresh eyes
of white satin

i am drunk

skunked
in the promise

of rainbow
eternal

Simply fantastic, dear Michele!

You are a poetic treat.

Love,
Margherita

ctowen
Member Elite

since 2001-10-18

Posts 2286
Green Mountains of VT

5 posted 2008-07-04 06:40 PM

I spoke of your forests and such roots
   they still grow endless and grounded

.... their beauty shares in your own  : )

   CT

inkedgoddess
Member Rara Avis

since 2002-11-19

Posts 7392
Ohio

6 posted 2008-07-05 10:36 PM

thanks for stopping by

ThisDiamond
Member Rara Avis

since 2002-02-22

Posts 9353
Michigan, USA

7 posted 2008-07-06 09:38 AM

The roots of the willow grow deep and vast...nursing the essence of rain, sometimes sad but most times replenished!
You are immortal in soul goddess.
Love to read your heartspeak

BluesSerenade
Member Patricius

since 2001-10-23

Posts 10549
By the Seaside

8 posted 2008-07-06 11:24 AM

I envy your true colors and raw emotion.
There's no glossing it over, no sugar coating,
and that makes for fabulous poetry in my book.

Love your ink, good goddess~

OwlSA
Member Rara Avis

since 2005-11-07

Posts 9347
Durban, South Africa

9 posted 2008-07-06 06:23 PM

Magnificent, as always - your colours splashed across the blue pages in such artistic array!

- Owl

Marchmadness
Member Rara Avis

since 2007-09-16

Posts 9271
So. El Monte, California

10 posted 2008-07-06 06:50 PM

Enjoyed the colors of your poetic skills, Inkgoddess. Beautiful poem.
Ida

XGarapanX
Senior Member

since 2008-06-19

Posts 1435
Antarctica

11 posted 2008-07-09 10:52 AM

This poem was inked and not scribed. Well tattooed!

·´~`·»Garapan«·´~`·

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