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graeshine2006 Member
since 2008-06-03
Posts 368The Prairie Lands, USA 
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Silent Wordless Never meant to be. I laughed with you and smiled with you and forgot my boundaries. Sad Shifts Friends no more I fear. The time has come to part our ways to this I shed a tear. Solid Satisfied I embrace my fate. Knowing well the time with you was stolen while we wait. Schooled Sanguine Smiling at the thought. Lifelong moments: they are short, but they will never be for naught [This message has been edited by graeshine2006 (07-01-2008 02:07 AM).] |
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XGarapanX Senior Member
since 2008-06-19
Posts 1435Antarctica |
Meaningful words, and extremely well written ones. ·´~`·»Garapan«·´~`· |
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Margherita Member Seraphic
since 2003-02-08
Posts 22236Eternity |
No, indeed, not even a moment is wasted, everything has its meaning. This is very insightful I would say and very beautifully rendered. Love, Margherita  |
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Richy Member Elite
since 2003-05-03
Posts 3050 |
In case you haven’t realized it yet, You are a poet Or a poetess, if you prefer. And a really good one at that! I really liked this Debra! Especially: Knowing well the time with you was time stolen while we wait. Lifelong moments: they are short, but they will never be for naught That is some real good gumption there Grae Which brings me to my next topic, your moniker. To me, it just doesn’t suit you. I know it’s your name, and it’s a nice one to be sure. But it sounds like Gray Shine? I don’t know, I’m just not feelin it You know what I’m saying. Okay, let’s keep the Shine, because just like Your Auntie, you both do that really well, But let’s just wash that gray right out of your hair (Why did I just feel like I was in a commercial?) Okay, here’s a few choices for ya: How about DayShine? Not too bad huh, kinda catchy. MoonShine? You know, that moon we were talking about yesterday, how nice it is. Oh wait, hang on a sec, “what, it’s actually a name for illegally made hooch juice?!” Oh forget about it, let’s scratch that one. Hey, howabout, RainOrShine? No? RiseAndShine? Oh, you’re not an early riser huh, yeah, either am I. I know… ShoeShine! Oh, you don’t like that one either eh? Well than you’re certainly not going to like SpitShine then. Okay, Okay, I got it I tell you… ! … StarShine!!!!!!!!!! I knew I could do it. That’s it, that’s my new name for you from now on. No, no, no, payment is necessary, really. Just keep smiling that big bright smile of your’s Like the shining star that you truly are. Best Regards, RichShine |
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graeshine2006 Member
since 2008-06-03
Posts 368The Prairie Lands, USA |
Too bad I don't have kin that administrates on here and could change all of my "graehine2006"s to "starshines"! Thanks for your nice (much too nice) words! Moonshine - that one is really crackin' me up! |
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