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Ericc
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since 2003-01-31
Posts 4178


0 posted 2008-06-29 11:30 AM



So we meet...realized in
form -
and surrendered at
once as
emptiness.
With no becoming we are free to
exist within one another.
With no where to leave off we mingle
intimate at fingertips -
Space meeting itself as form in a
play of pure delight.
And in this moment we
simply are -
Form,
Emptiness,
And something more
entirely our
own.

© Copyright 2008 Eric P McCarty - All Rights Reserved
A Romantic Heart
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since 1999-09-03
Posts 5496
Forever In Your Heart
1 posted 2008-06-29 12:13 PM


intimate at fingertips -I love your fingertips

ThisDiamond
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since 2002-02-22
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Michigan, USA
2 posted 2008-06-29 12:26 PM


..."and something more entirely, our own"
Bravo!!

BluesSerenade
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since 2001-10-23
Posts 10549
By the Seaside
3 posted 2008-06-29 12:29 PM


And in this moment we
simply are -
Form,
Emptiness,
And something more

Oh this is the perfect ending~  
What a sweet treat your series is.  
Thank you for sharing the tender caress of your thoughts.  

Honeybunch
Member Rara Avis
since 2001-12-29
Posts 7115
South Africa
4 posted 2008-06-29 02:20 PM


Yes, this one makes perfect sense and how well you've written it.  All three were a treat!

Helen

XGarapanX
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since 2008-06-19
Posts 1435
Antarctica
5 posted 2008-06-29 05:12 PM


This has been crazy good, as is your writing.

·´~`·­»Garapan«­·´~`·

Margherita
Member Seraphic
since 2003-02-08
Posts 22236
Eternity
6 posted 2008-06-29 06:15 PM


quote:
With no becoming we are free to
exist within one another.


Your thoughts are extremely captivating, dear Eric!
I enjoyed your series deeply.
This moment holds us as one and I feel it.

Margherita


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