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Ericc
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0 posted 2008-06-29 11:27 AM



Before a whispered
word -
Emptiness waits to know
your lips.
And only then come to
form.


© Copyright 2008 Eric P McCarty - All Rights Reserved
A Romantic Heart
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Forever In Your Heart
1 posted 2008-06-29 12:07 PM


So delicate, soft, warm ...I like peeking inside your heart!

Emptiness will no longer wait...a heart must be filled with love

now to put all three pieces together!

BluesSerenade
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By the Seaside
2 posted 2008-06-29 12:23 PM


Mmmm hmmm~  Atiicipation is making me wait!

Nice~

ThisDiamond
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3 posted 2008-06-29 12:23 PM


A toast to the kiss of life.
Read all three in succession.
What breathtaking introspection here. ;0

kaile
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4 posted 2008-06-29 12:54 PM


intriguing. it's nice to have the emptiness dissipated, i'm sure
Ericc
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5 posted 2008-06-29 02:09 PM


It's one and the same Kalie...it's only
our recognition that makes it
different.
Form/emptiness
Particles/wave
You/....me.

Love,
Eric

Honeybunch
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6 posted 2008-06-29 02:16 PM


You speak a truth here, Eric!

Helen

JamesMichael
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7 posted 2008-06-29 03:30 PM


Nice...James
XGarapanX
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8 posted 2008-06-29 04:55 PM


Magic.

·´~`·­»Garapan«­·´~`·

Margherita
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Eternity
9 posted 2008-06-29 06:13 PM


Sublime! I adore your perceptivity and how you put it into words, dear Eric.


Margherita


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