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huddersfield
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0 posted 2008-06-29 09:41 AM


I've decided to write something for a frined as a wedding gift, thought something from the heart would make a nice touch. Anyway, was just wondering if anyone could help me with the grammer and set out of this as they arn't really my strong points. Any advice or tips would be greatly apprciated. Thankyou in advance.

God’s Cradle

From the moment you are born your living in God’s cradle,
nestled in his palm watched over by his loving gaze.
His opposite hand, a second person nestles,
a person chosen by God to share your heart and dreams.


So before you even had the chance to stare into each others eyes
your hearts were drawn together.
For God had planted the seed of love in your hearts,
and through time those seeds did grow.


Nourished by God’s love they seeked each other out,
spanning the darkness that lay between you both till they finally
embraced, allowing you to cross God’s bridge and into each others arms,
where the two halves of the same heart finally became one.


Now that you are together you are blessed with something special,
It is so precious
that it can only be given to you by God himself,
and that is true love.


And from this true love another branch has grown,
taking hold around your finger where it will stay
as a symbol of your eternal love to Mark
and your eternal love to Sam.


© Copyright 2008 Glynn Denniss - All Rights Reserved
A Romantic Heart
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Forever In Your Heart
1 posted 2008-06-29 09:42 AM


This was beautiful, perfect for a wedding gift~
Loved It!

XGarapanX
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since 2008-06-19
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Antarctica
2 posted 2008-06-29 09:52 AM


Love from above!

·´~`·­»Garapan«­·´~`·

huddersfield
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since 2003-12-29
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huddersfield, England
3 posted 2008-06-29 01:52 PM


thankyou for your replies :-)
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