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A Romantic Heart
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Forever In Your Heart

0 posted 2008-06-28 05:34 PM




You whisper, I will listen,
awaiting in serene silence,
humbled by your presence,

Cloaked in graceful humility,
I stand in the awe of you,
you have made my heart heavy,

I desire to know you more,
to seek you and to find,
love everlasting and pure.

[This message has been edited by A Romantic Heart (06-28-2008 07:21 PM).]

© Copyright 2008 Millette A. (Lester) Addison - All Rights Reserved
secondhanddreampoet
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a 'Universalist' !
1 posted 2008-06-28 07:08 PM


for whatever my ever-most-humble opinion is worth (or not?)...
this is a most fine piece of pure Romanticism!

[however, the giant 'graphics image' rather detracts
  from the grace and power of the written imagery]

much applause for the 'penning!

Richy
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2 posted 2008-06-28 08:56 PM



The tongue
of amour
Has not
the need for words,
yes.

It is a communication
Of sight,
And touch,
Of Taste,
And the bouquet,
Of allurement

Our hearts get heavy
When feelings kept
Are not released,
To those
For whom
They are intended

It is the whispering
Of sweet nothings
That show us,
Our real desires

As your silence coos softly
Upon yearning’s pride
That replies deeply
Within

XGarapanX
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since 2008-06-19
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Antarctica
3 posted 2008-06-28 11:33 PM


Sublime. This actually makes love sound attractive, lol! (sorry, my own bad experiences talking)

·´~`·­»Garapan«­·´~`·

2islander2
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by the sea
4 posted 2008-06-29 01:27 AM


humbled by your presence,

you told everything in this single verse, your poem is both loud of meanings and  mysterious...Enjoyed very much

   yann


  

A Romantic Heart
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Forever In Your Heart
5 posted 2008-06-29 02:18 AM


Bruce,
I sincerely wish to thank you for noticing
my talent, and placing me in the heavens
as a bright and shining star....

my heartfelt thanks and gratitude!

~ARH

A Romantic Heart
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Forever In Your Heart
6 posted 2008-06-29 02:20 AM


Richy,

My , my, you should post these replies of yours as poems, they are too lovely to be hidden
below my poems....

thank You for letting me know that I am inspiring you, that fuels my fire to inspire and to write more!

~ARH

A Romantic Heart
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Forever In Your Heart
7 posted 2008-06-29 02:22 AM


Mr. G....

You just need some love...lol, Your love may have been bad in the past, but that is the past, today is a new day for you!

Mr. Ken...LOL

A Romantic Heart
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Forever In Your Heart
8 posted 2008-06-29 02:27 AM


Yann,

Mysterious is what I like to be, to keep you
interested, never boring, intriguing,always something new, spontaneous .....fun!

thanks for seeing me, in my poetry!

Richy
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9 posted 2008-06-29 03:22 AM



I asked my replies if they wanted to leave here and come out into open as poems, but they said no, that they would rather stay here close to you.

Oh well, who can blame them?

Rich

A Romantic Heart
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Forever In Your Heart
10 posted 2008-06-29 03:35 AM


oh how sweet, so they are just mine, for me...so i will keep them close...
Artic Wind
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Realm of Supernatural
11 posted 2008-06-29 10:19 PM


I enjoyed this!

ARCTIC WIND

A Romantic Heart
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Forever In Your Heart
12 posted 2008-06-30 07:46 AM


Mr. wind when are you going to write?

I have been waiting to read

your imaginative poetry~

~ARH

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