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OwlSA
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since 2005-11-07
Posts 9347
Durban, South Africa

0 posted 2008-06-28 05:15 PM



JE VOUDRAIS TE DONNER
1 January 1983

Je voudrais te donner
le bonheur
des amis
des rires
des sourires
de mon amour

Je voudrais te donner
le bonheur
des animaux fidèles
des pluies d’été
des ruisseaux étincelants sous le soleil
des oiseaux de toutes les couleurs.

Je voudrais te donner
le bonheur
du courage quand la vie est dure
de l’espoir quand ton ciel est noir
de la foi quand le courage et l’espoir
t’échappent.

Je voudrais te donner
le bonheur
d’être heureux
sans moi
s’il faut être sans moi.

Je voudrais te donner
Le Bonheur
puisque
tu es
Mon Bonheur.

I WOULD LIKE TO GIVE YOU
1 January 1983

I would like to give you
the happiness
of friends
of laughter
of smiles
of my love.

I would like to give you
the happiness
of faithful animals
of summer rains
of sparkling streams under the sun
of bird of all colours.

I would like to give you
the happiness
of courage when life is hard
of hope when your sky is black
of faith when courage and hope
escape you.

I would like to give you
the happiness
of being happy
without me
if you have to be without me.

I would like to give you
Happiness
since
you are
My Happiness.

- Owl

© Copyright 2008 Diana van den Berg - All Rights Reserved
KeyLimeSorbet
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since 2008-03-05
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Colorado
1 posted 2008-06-28 06:54 PM


:-)
Earth Angel
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Realms of Light
2 posted 2008-06-28 07:05 PM


Diana, I saved this faster than I can say "le bonheur" ~ and that is exactly what you are spreading with this joy-filled piece of writing!



Love to lovely, loving you!
Linda

Richy
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since 2003-05-03
Posts 3050

3 posted 2008-06-28 08:07 PM


And I would like to give you
Blessedness as well
My Dear Diana
For you are the smile in my heart
And the light of my joy

Rich

Midnitesun
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Gaia
4 posted 2008-06-28 10:01 PM


Oh, now THIS is a keeper!
"I would like to give you
Happiness" What a wonderful thing to gift!

2islander2
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since 2008-03-12
Posts 6825
by the sea
5 posted 2008-06-29 01:53 AM


Je voudrais te donner
le bonheur
d’être heureux
sans moi
s’il faut être sans moi.
Chère Owl, tu l'as écrit...C'est une phrase magnifique qui illumine ton poème, je pense qu'il n'y a pas de plus belle preuve d'amour que ce que tu dis là...

je te remercie, tu m'as ému pour la journée.

  un grand bravo.

yann

Marchmadness
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since 2007-09-16
Posts 9271
So. El Monte, California
6 posted 2008-06-29 01:59 AM


This is lovely and so "you," Diana.
                                     Ida

Roniece Dawson-Bruce
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since 2000-01-29
Posts 5689
Sydney, Australia
7 posted 2008-06-29 02:14 AM


exquisite writing Diana... tres tres bon!
love RDB

Be kind at heart....for everyone you meet has their own battle to fight.........

OwlSA
Member Rara Avis
since 2005-11-07
Posts 9347
Durban, South Africa
8 posted 2008-06-29 05:52 AM


Thank you, KeyLimeSorbet.

Thank you, Linda.  I am so glad you think so.  Warm, smiles and hugs.

Thank you, Richy.  That is so sweet.  Hugs to you too.

Thank you, Kacy for thinking so.  

Merci beaucoup, pour l’avoir si bien senti mes sentiments à cette étape.  J’en suis très émue que je t’ai ému pour toute la journée.  

Thank you, Ida.  What a beautiful compliment.  

Merci beaucoup, Roniece! Smiles (only allowed 5 smilies per response).

- Owl

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