Lunes from poetry workshop

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Open Poetry #42

Lunes from poetry workshop

graeshine2006
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since 2008-06-03

Posts 368
The Prairie Lands, USA

0 posted 2008-06-28 03:34 PM

Had to do this... I got a "well done" from Balladeer on my Lunes.

Lune 1:

My children mirror
each other.
Reflections of love.

Lune 2:

The tree stands
tall, reaching for the sky,
fullfilling it's fate.

OwlSA
Member Rara Avis

since 2005-11-07

Posts 9347
Durban, South Africa

1 posted 2008-06-28 04:59 PM

And a well done from me too! One of each kind. Much enjoyed.

- Owl

Midnitesun

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since 2001-05-18

Posts 28647
Gaia

2 posted 2008-06-28 09:56 PM

Well done!
(BTW, nice to have you here!)

Moonkist
Member

since 2006-09-29

Posts 197
Pennsylvania

3 posted 2008-06-28 10:31 PM

Short and sweet!
'Tis kizmet!

/Peace, Helen

"Ah! my Be-loved, fill the cup that clears
To-day of past Regrets and future Fears..."
-Rubaiyat of Omar Khayyam

graeshine2006
Member

since 2008-06-03

Posts 368
The Prairie Lands, USA

4 posted 2008-06-28 10:41 PM

Thanks Owl - although I already told you thanks once!!!

Thanks so much for the nice words and welcome midnitesun.

Thanks moonkist - by the way, love your name, wish I would have thought of that!

XGarapanX
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since 2008-06-19

Posts 1435
Antarctica

5 posted 2008-06-28 11:43 PM

Seriously well done.

·´~`·»Garapan«·´~`·

Richy
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since 2003-05-03

Posts 3050

6 posted 2008-06-29 12:11 PM

Dear Debra, so nice to see you embracing your poetic soul with new challenges.

Your lucky children
are so blessed
To reflect your love

Great poet!
Wonderful mom!

Rich

Balladeer

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since 1999-06-05

Posts 25505
Ft. Lauderdale, Fl USA

7 posted 2008-06-29 09:34 AM

Nice to see them posted here for everyone to enjoy

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